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The sound of silence ♥
When you realise that you live at this time when everything is ''ended'' and you can't do anything (about it) , and that you are alone with your toughts and the existence is the only thing you have.. you are disappointed. You don't want news. You hate everything which is happening around you.. But it's not that bad, because instead you have (lots of) days and nights for thinking. You will realise what you want and what you need to be happy ! You don't have/ bother with others' opinions around , so you can be calm!Sometimes it's better to be alone .. I don't say that you must be alone your whole life but you need to be awhile.. Trust me when you are 19 years old you can't share everyone's opinion and your life looks like anarchy!
Sometimes you don't realise that you do things that you don't like to do ! Sometimes you can listen the silence that is pure , that lives inside you ! It must be real, it must be in your dreams! We need to listen to our hearts sometimes but not always ! And this sometimes is now -when you want to die!( or "when you are desperate") The only thing that makes you hurt is your turbidity/ambiguity/hesitation.. And you need to re-build your dreams.. You need to reach your goals !
-You need to touch the sky and never think that something is ended ! Just feel the future ♥♥
Hi, Salome! What a well-written article it is. Just pay some attention to your use of punctuations and choices of separating sentences. With some more coherence, the article will read much better!
Cheers.
The sound of silence ♥
When you realise that you live at this time everything is ''ended'' and you can't do anything !(?) You are alone with your thoughts and you can just exist .. You are disappointed , you don't want news, you hate everything which is happening near you.. But it's not too bad. You have lots of days and nights for thinking, you can realise what you want, what you need to be happy ! You don't have other opinions around and you can be calm! Sometimes it's better to be alone .. I don't say that you must be alone your whole life but you need to be for a while.. Trust me when you are 19 years old you can't share everyone's opinion and your life looks like anarchy ! Sometimes you do not realise that you do things that you don't like to do ! Sometimes you can listen to the silence which is pure and lives inside you ! It must be real, it must be your dreams! We need to listen to our hearts sometimes but not always ! and this sometimes is now -when you want to die! The only thing which makes you hurt is your turbidity.. and you need to re-build your dreams.. You need to reach your goals !-You need to touch the sky-and never think that something is ended ! Just feel the future ♥♥
Very well written!
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