Ielts essay part 2 ( which one should be more rewarded?)
Some people think that only the best students should be rewarded. Others, however, think that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people claim that students of more excellent should be rewarded, while others argue that it is a better idea to reward the most progressive students. In my opinion, both kinds of students deserve to be rewarded.
The practice of rewarding the best students is a widely used in many schools around the world, the reason for this practice is the idea that students do their best should be encourage and that set a good example for other students, in other words, it telling other students they can also do their best. Moreover, school should create a competitive atmosphere around the students and build students’ personality of confident. For example, the best students was rewarded and they enjoy being appreciated and willing to keep the record in ensuing time. If other students also want be rewarded they will preform better. Therefore, this way is benefit for the students who want to be the best.
On the other hand, effort is also a quality of worth to be rewarded. The most progressive students who are not that intelligent and may be slow at acquiring new knowledge or skills, they can make a great progress means that they work harder than others. Most of students are not the best, they need the role model to inspire themselves do more better. Also, from the most of students point of view, It’s a high standard of do the best for most of students, students who making a progress always do the best for themselves. Thus, reward the students who show improvements is also a important way for education.
Overall, it is hard to choose between these two approaches for each of them has more important effects on all of students. I believe that both of these can be used at the same time.