IELTS Essay Part 2 (Environment)
One of the best way to solve the world’s environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel and all vehicles. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
With increasing awareness of fossil fuel is harmful to environment, people claim that a method of increase the cost of fuel and all vehicles is a best way to solve the issue. Generally, I hold a different opinion.
It’s true that increase the cost of fuel and all vehicles can reduce a slight damage of environment problems, but it barely change the habit of people using the fuel and driving the vehicles as people rely on fossil fuel as a basic energy in our daily life. Therefore, increase the cost on it just a temporary measure. From the long-term point of view, using alternative energy sources and changing the way of people travel is a key way to address the problem.
A more environmentally sound option is to adopt clean energy rather than fossil fuel, such as wind sunlight, wind, tides and etc. Which often provides energy in four important areas, such as water cooling or heating, transportation, electricity generation, and rural energy services. These alternative energy present a feature of renewable which have advantage of lower pollution and reduce carbon dioxide emissions.
A more effective method that government could take in busy cities is to encourage the use of public transport. This means that transportation options have to be plentiful, convenient and reliable, and people need to be able to afford them. Besides, government should run campaigns to encourage people to be less dependent on their cars.
To sum up, the trend toward rising the cost of fuel and car is a temporary way. The investment in clean energy and people should be encouraged to use other means of transport is a better answer.
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IELTS Essay Part 2 (Environment)
One of the best ways to solve the world’s environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel and all vehicles. To what extend do you agree or disagree?With increasing awareness of fossil fuel being harmful to the environment, people claim that a method of increasing the cost of fuel and all vehicles is the best way to solve the issue. Generally, I hold a different opinion.
It’s true that increasing* the cost of fuel and all vehicles can slightly reduce damage of environmental problems, but it barely changes the habit of people using the fuel and driving the vehicles as people rely on fossil fuel as a basic energy in our daily life. Therefore, increasing the cost on it is just a temporary measure. From the long-term point of view, using alternative energy sources and changing the way people travel is a key way to address the problem.
A more environmentally sound option is to adopt clean energy rather than fossil fuel, such as wind, sunlight, tides, etc.** which often provides energy in four important areas, such as water cooling or heating, transportation, electricity generation, and rural energy services. These alternative energies present a feature of renewables which have the/an advantage of lower pollution and reduced carbon dioxide emissions.
A more effective method that governments could take in busy cities is to encourage the use of public transport. This means that transportation options have to be plentiful, convenient and reliable, and people need to be able to afford them. Besides, governments should run campaigns to encourage people to be less dependent on their cars.
To sum up, the trend toward rising the cost of fuel and cars is a temporary solution. The investment in clean energy and people should be encouraged to use other means of transport is a better answer.
[* Or: "that an increase in the cost".
** The term etc. means "and so on", so when you wrote "and etc." that was the same as writing "and and so on."]
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