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I missed a step on the stairs and I sprained my ankle when delivering. It's painful so that I went to bed with icing.
I hope it going to better soon.Sentence 1:
The sentence is correct EXCEPT for "when delivering." I don't know what you mean. You could end the sentence after ANKLE.
Sentence 2:
Change: ...with icing
To: ...with ice on my ankle.
Sentence 3
SHOULD BE: I hope IT"S going to BE better soon.
0 votedNovember 17, 201601. My job (Looking for someone who can improve my writting skills)
2. For one year, I work at a pharmaceutical service provider as a Data Manager. It merely consists to build a database for a clinical trial. 3. A clinical trial is a necessary step allowing a pharmaceutical laboratory to obtain a agreement for selling. They have to perform a4. clinical trial for a health product like a drug of a medical device. The safety of the drug needs to be proven by the results of the clinical trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.
5. clinical trial for a health product like a drug of a medical device. The safety of the drug needs to be proven by the results of the clinical trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.
6. trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.
The numbers above make it easier to indicate corrections.
1. writing (not writting)
2. Turn the sentence around and use the past tense: I worked as a data manager for a pharmaceutical service provider for one year.
If you are still working in this position, use the present perfect tense and move "for one year" to the beginning of the sentence:
3. ...is a necessary step FOR allowing....a SALES AGREEMENT.
4. ....for health productS, SUCH AS DRUGS OR MEDICAL DEVICES. Data .... is aN ESSENTIAL PART of clinical trials.
0 votedNovember 17, 20161
