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    November 20, 2016
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  • Corrected

    Yesterday's note

    I missed a step on the stairs and I sprained my ankle when delivering. It's painful so that I went to bed with icing.
    I hope it going to better soon.


    Sentence 1:

    The sentence is correct EXCEPT for "when delivering." I don't know what you mean. You could end the sentence after ANKLE.


    Sentence 2:

    Change:  ...with icing

    To: ...with ice on my ankle.


    Sentence 3

    SHOULD BE: I hope IT"S going to BE better soon.




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    November 17, 2016
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    1.  My job (Looking for someone who can improve my writting skills)

    2.  For one year, I work at a pharmaceutical service provider as a Data Manager. It merely consists to build a database for a clinical trial. 3.  A clinical trial is a necessary step allowing a pharmaceutical laboratory to obtain a agreement for selling. They have to perform a  

    4.  clinical trial for a health product like a drug of a medical device. The safety of the drug needs to be proven by the results of the clinical trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.

    5.  clinical trial for a health product like a drug of a medical device. The safety of the drug needs to be proven by the results of the clinical trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.

    6. trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.



    The numbers above make it easier to indicate corrections. 

    1.  writing (not writting)
    2.  Turn the sentence around and use the past tense: I worked as a data manager for a pharmaceutical service provider for one year.  
    If you are still working in this position, use the present perfect tense and move "for one year" to the beginning of the sentence:

    3.  ...is a necessary step FOR allowing....a SALES AGREEMENT. 
    4.  ....for health productS, SUCH AS DRUGS OR MEDICAL DEVICES. Data .... is aN ESSENTIAL PART of clinical trials.    
      




     

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    November 17, 2016
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