What Is my Plan Today?
Good morning everybody,
My plan today I will work at 10:00 AM I'm a saleaman I work for a petroleum company I sell pipelines uses for oil and gas I will have a lof tasks I will check my email after I will response for anyone need respond after that I will check the status for all companies.
The second I will finish my work 4:00 PM because I will go to book fair because I will buy some books about marketing, I like marketing it's beautiful materical I enjoyed to read about marketing also I will bus books about human resources because to make everyone happy and achieve goals in life.
Finally, I will buy books about English because I like English so much.
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What Is my Plan Today?
Good morning, everybody.Today, I plan to work at 10:00 AM. I'm a salesman who works for a petroleum company. I sell pipelines used for oil and gas. I have a lot of tasks. First, I will check my email. Next, I will respond to emails. After that, I will check the status for all companies.
After I finish work at 4:00 PM, I will go to the book fair because I want to buy books about marketing. I like marketing because it's interesting material and I enjoy reading about marketing. Also, I will buy books about human resources because I want to make everyone happy and achieve their goals in life.
Finally, I will buy books about English because I like English so much.
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Other people have already done an excellent job editing your text. Instead, I will take a holistic approach and point out two strong points and two things to improve:
Two strong points:
1. Your writing has a nice voice. What I mean is, I can hear you talking. The tone is personal and real.
2. It is obvious you have studied English. Your sentence structure is good and most of your sentences are correct as written. There are a few minor spelling mistakes.
Two things to work on:
1. Punctuation. You need more periods after your sentences in each paragraph. Do you need help with this? Can you recheck your writing and insert the periods?
2. Most of your sentences start with "I." This is not wrong. For sentence variety, we could change the wording. You will find good examples below, especially Liz Liz.
My advice:
1. Write a new draft, using the suggestions of your Friends below.
2. Using pen and pencil--preferably!--rewrite your piece, then read it outloud.
3. Repeat Step 2.
4. Repeat steps 2 and 3. This method really works!!
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What Is my plan for today?
Good morning everybody,My plan for today: I will begin work at 10:00 AM. I'm a salesman and work for a petroleum company. I sell pipelines used for oil and gas. I will have a lot tasks to do. I will check my email then I will respond to everyone who needs a response. After that I will check the status for all companies.
I will finish my work 4:00 PM because I will go to the book fair. I will buy some books about marketing. I like marketing because it's interesting material and I enjoyed to read about it (the subject). Also I will buy books about human resources because I want to make everyone happy and achieve their goals in life.
Finally, I will buy books about English because I like English so much.
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Ummm I think You have a great work and good plan for this day
I wish you success Saleaman
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What Is my Plan Today?
Actually I'm going to talk about this Title , "What is my Plan Today"
it's sounds like puzzle question or asking with someone ,so instead of that you can tell like
"My plans for Today" .
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