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For one year, I work at a pharmaceutical service provider as a Data Manager. It merely consists to build a database for a clinical trial. A clinical trial is a necessary step allowing a pharmaceutical laboratory to obtain a agreement for selling. They have to perform a clinical trial for a health product like a drug of a medical device. The safety of the drug needs to be proven by the results of the clinical trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.
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1. My job (Looking for someone who can improve my writting skills)
2. For one year, I work at a pharmaceutical service provider as a Data Manager. It merely consists to build a database for a clinical trial. 3. A clinical trial is a necessary step allowing a pharmaceutical laboratory to obtain a agreement for selling. They have to perform a4. clinical trial for a health product like a drug of a medical device. The safety of the drug needs to be proven by the results of the clinical trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.
5. clinical trial for a health product like a drug of a medical device. The safety of the drug needs to be proven by the results of the clinical trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.
6. trial. Thus, the data management process is a part of whatever clinical research. During the research, I have to collaborate with a physician, statistician and a project manager.
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1. writing (not writting)
2. Turn the sentence around and use the past tense: I worked as a data manager for a pharmaceutical service provider for one year.
If you are still working in this position, use the present perfect tense and move "for one year" to the beginning of the sentence:
3. ...is a necessary step FOR allowing....a SALES AGREEMENT.
4. ....for health productS, SUCH AS DRUGS OR MEDICAL DEVICES. Data .... is aN ESSENTIAL PART of clinical trials.
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