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Yesterday's note I missed a step on the stairs and I sprained my ankle when delivering. It's painful so that I went to bed with icing. I hope it going to better soon.

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Yesterday's note

I missed a step on the stairs and I sprained my ankle when while delivering (This verb needs an object. What were you delivering?). It's painful so that I went to bed with icing an ice pack.
I hope it is going to get better soon.


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Yesterday's note

I missed a step on the stairs and I sprained my ankle when delivering. It's painful so that I went to bed with icing.
I hope it going to better soon.


Sentence 1:

The sentence is correct EXCEPT for "when delivering." I don't know what you mean. You could end the sentence after ANKLE.


Sentence 2:

Change:  ...with icing

To: ...with ice on my ankle.


Sentence 3

SHOULD BE: I hope IT"S going to BE better soon.




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