I have so poor English in words. I struggle with English words. Please correct and give me more new words instead^^

It's 11pm now. It is raining outside. Everyone here went to sleep already, but I am still awake. I haven't been on Italki for years. Actually, at first, I didn't come here for long, just for some a few weeks. Now, I am like a newer too still new to this(? I am not sure what you wanted to say here) I remember people here were so friendly and ready to help, so I am writing with hope that I can get some replies here by tomorrow. Thank you for you taking the time to read. G9 Goodnight if your time is like in Vietnam and have a nice day if is different. Huyen.

** Keep practicing, and you will get better each time! **

Who discovered America?

There are many theories about who discovered America. Before, we taught Cristobal Colon (Christopher Columbus) <<NOT incorrect, that is just his English name>> was the first foreing foreign person to arrived here, but nowadays there are is evidences that may be a proof that another foreing foreign person arrived first. For example, some people said that vinkings arrived first at in Canada, others said Polynesians arrived first at in South America and finally, a few groups said Jews arrived firts first at in North America. It doesn't matter who arrived first, the most important thing is that America became a dream to people around the world, because it gave a second chance to many people.

**I think it would be good for you to slow down when you write, or read over your entry, so you don't miss the small mistakes. Your entry has very good content, but it is the small mistakes that take away from it**

PROPOSAL TO CARRY OUT A RESEARCH PROJECT IN ANOTHER COUNTRY

EXECUTIVE SUMMARY: The aim of this proposal is to suggest a research project in another country, in order to apply for the travel grant which is offered.
STATEMENT OF NEED: As as an English student, I have always been interested in knowing how people from different countries learn foreign languages. It is a well known fact that Spanish people seem to have more difficulties in learning languages than people from other countries such as Germany or Switzerland. For this reason, I recommend that a group of students should visit schools in other countries so that they can be shown how foreign languages are taught.
PROJECT DESCRIPTION: I propose that every member of the group should go to a different country. A collaboration programme should be developed, so that these students could attend classes in some schools. In this way, they could pay attention to some important points, such as what skills are mostly practiced, or how much time they spend on developing these skills at school. They would share their conclussions afterwards to figure out if there is a common ground in them.
BUDGET ANALYSIS: The estimated budget would be 1000 euros per student, including plane tickets and accommodation for two weeks in the country of their choice.
CONCLUSION: All things considered, this project would give us the opportunity to have a better knowledge of how people from other countries learn different languages, in order to improve the way they are taught in Spain. Therefore, all the Spanish students would benefit from it.

**Overall, this is a fantastic entry! You clearly have a vast understanding of the English language.**

A terrifying trip

It happened when my friend and I went to Malaysia 13 years ago. I remember that the travel agent advised us not to go there in summer because there always were many foods there at that time. She also told us that in summer the heat is so stifling that you can hardly breathe. That was why we decided to go there in Autumn. We wanted to have an enjoyable holiday.

There, one of the trips was to go to the top of a mountain. That day it was overcast, so our tour guide suggested that we take our raincoats. I remember that in our journey to get to the top there were a lot of curves and such narrow roads that it was not possible to pass out with any another bus.

In the middle of the route to get the top, the bus stopped in a viewing-point to take pictures and we could noticed that it was raining heavily on at the top. Immediately, panic broke out among us, but the tour guide managed to calm down us. She also told said that there was nothing to worry about, that the weather was usually like that in that zone. We trusted her words and we went on our journey/trip to the top. Suddenly, that heavy rain was becoming, step by step, torrential and we saw how the water ran downhill by itself pulling everything real hard. Only a few minutes later, we had to get off the bus, because that the bus was being dragged by the water! People screamed in horror and I only tried to look for shelter. When I was finally could be able to get to a small restaurant to be safe, I saw an elderly couple who couldn't be weren't able to walk well, and they both were stopped in the middle of the road. Without thinking twice, I went out helping to help them. I knew it was unlikely that we would reached that shelter, but I was not able to could not abandone them there. Finally, three fire trucks came to rescue us and we were taken to the hotel. Although we couldn't leave the hotel for 3 days because of the floods, at least we were alive.** Overall, this was a very nice entry! Great job!**