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PROPOSAL TO CARRY OUT A RESEARCH PROJECT IN ANOTHER COUNTRY
EXECUTIVE SUMMARY.The aim of this proposal is to suggest a research project in another country, in order to apply for the travel grant which is offered.
STATEMENT OF NEED.
As as English student, I have always been interested in knowing how people from different countries learn foreign languages. It is well known that Spanish people seem to have more difficulties in learning languages than people from, say, Germany or Switzerland. For this reason, I recommend that a group of students should visit schools in those(?) countries so that they can see how foreign languages are taught.
PROJECT DESCRIPTION
I propose that each member of the group should go to a different country. A collaboration program should be developed allowing these students to attend classes in some schools. In this way, they could learn some important points such as what skills are mostly practised and how much time is spent on them etc. They would share their conclusions afterwards to figure out if there is common ground in them.
BUDGET ANALYSIS
The estimated budget would be 1000 euros per student, including plane tickets and two weeks' accommodation in the country of their choice.
CONCLUSION
All things considered, this project would give us an opportunity to know better how people from other countries learn foreign languages, in order to improve how they are taught in Spain. Therefore, all Spanish students would benefit from it.
Very well written!
PROPOSAL TO CARRY OUT A RESEARCH PROJECT IN ANOTHER COUNTRY
EXECUTIVE SUMMARY: The aim of this proposal is to suggest a research project in another country, in order to apply for the travel grant which is offered.STATEMENT OF NEED: As as an English student, I have always been interested in knowing how people from different countries learn foreign languages. It is a well known fact that Spanish people seem to have more difficulties in learning languages than people from other countries such as Germany or Switzerland. For this reason, I recommend that a group of students should visit schools in other countries so that they can be shown how foreign languages are taught.
PROJECT DESCRIPTION: I propose that every member of the group should go to a different country. A collaboration programme should be developed, so that these students could attend classes in some schools. In this way, they could pay attention to some important points, such as what skills are mostly practiced, or how much time they spend on developing these skills at school. They would share their conclussions afterwards to figure out if there is a common ground in them.
BUDGET ANALYSIS: The estimated budget would be 1000 euros per student, including plane tickets and accommodation for two weeks in the country of their choice.
CONCLUSION: All things considered, this project would give us the opportunity to have a better knowledge of how people from other countries learn different languages, in order to improve the way they are taught in Spain. Therefore, all the Spanish students would benefit from it.
**Overall, this is a fantastic entry! You clearly have a vast understanding of the English language.**
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