Who discovered America?
There are many theories about who discoverd America. Before, we tought Cristobal Colon was first foreing person to arrived here, but nowadays there are evidences that may be a proof that other foreing person arrived first. For example, some people said that vinkings arrived first at Canada, others said Polinesians arrived first at south America and finally a few group said Jews arrived firts at North America. It doesn't matter who arrived first, the most important is that America became a dream to people around the world because gave a second chance to many people.
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Who discovered America?
There are many theories about who discovered America. Before, we taught Cristobal Colon (Christopher Columbus) <<NOT incorrect, that is just his English name>> was the first foreing foreign person to arrived here, but nowadays there are is evidences that may be a proof that another foreing foreign person arrived first. For example, some people said that vinkings arrived first at in Canada, others said Polynesians arrived first at in South America and finally, a few groups said Jews arrived firts first at in North America. It doesn't matter who arrived first, the most important thing is that America became a dream to people around the world, because it gave a second chance to many people.**I think it would be good for you to slow down when you write, or read over your entry, so you don't miss the small mistakes. Your entry has very good content, but it is the small mistakes that take away from it**
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