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Hey there! I am preparing for IETLS, especially for the oral exam. If you are an English speaker, you are the one I am looking for! Also, if you want to improve your Mandarin or want to learn more about Chinese culture, I won't hesitate to help you.
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    她他们一定要找到她(是一个过去时的练习)

    三个美国学生接到了一封信了。他们的老师去世了,他去世以前,他让他们去中国帮一个女孩做些事。信很短因为他们不知道她的名字,也不知道她住在哪里,他们会说汉语不好汉语说得不好,只有一个照片。在照片上有一个很漂亮的女孩和一个湖。
    两个星期以后,他们/这三个学生坐飞机一起去中国了。
    到北京在街上他们问了很多人。某人说了他有一个朋友他可能知道照片上的湖在哪里。
    他们/于是这些学生坐飞机去了见面了这个人。他知道那个地方但是不知道哪个湖。终于,他们/学生们找到了湖的名字,所以她他们去在哪里那里找到了她。
    那时候,她他们都比较累。他们都要是第一个找到她因为他们喜欢她。最好人的学生是第一个找到她。他帮了女孩的学生有一些新的书。那个女孩是小学老师。乡里很小所以他们没有很多钱,学校只有一个老师,是她,因为美国学生的老师要了帮帮助她。

    多谢


    You did really great job.

    The sentence underlined is what I confused, which I could do nothing.

    Besides, it is better to use multiple personal pronoun when you are describing a story including a lot of people, in case the audience confused. haha

    Hope it helps!

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    March 25, 2016
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    2016年3月25日:甜甜圈

    我星期二那天,跟每天一样,进去食堂吃晚饭。但是,当/那天我感到有些不同/不一样:食堂开始卖甜甜圈了!我的眼睛瞪大了/瞪大了眼睛,口开始流口水。此后,我每天都吃一个甜甜圈,肚子逐渐地开始鼓胀/鼓起来/长肉啦!作为成年人就是这样,我想吃什么,就可以吃什么,没有人能告诉我该怎么做!我是完全自由的!但是缺点是我可能很快就患有会得糖尿病,因为我真的没有约束/毫无节制,哈哈。


    Great work!

    Different people have different correction, as we have different speaking habits. haha

    Just for your reference.

    :-) Have a nice weekend!

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    March 25, 2016
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    Difference between ruthless/heartless/relentless/cruel What is the difference between them? Thanks in advance!
    March 25, 2016
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    A day with agency I went to consult an education agency today. They made a bid of RMB25,000 for applying for university and visa, which is sooooooo expensive! Actually, I don't trust the agency at all. My friend who went to America last year told me I could DIY it, which means I could apply for school and visa all by myself. But I feel dubious about my ability doing this. Today is also my DAY14 of fitness, only the 14 of 365! I still have a long way to go.
    March 25, 2016
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    one short question about the word 'play' In the sentence : The products currently in development need to play in this more competitive environment. What is the meaning of 'play' here? Is it a common usage?
    March 21, 2016
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    2016年3月17日:富二代

    我刚刚看完一个上传YouTube的真人秀节目/我刚刚在 YouTube 上看完一个真人秀节目,叫《公主我最大》,关于四个亚裔女富二代。平时我不喜欢看真人秀,但是不知何故/不知为何(不知何故也可以,古代的人常这么说,比较文绉绉(literary))就对这个节目上瘾,哈哈。她们叫做「超级富豪」,可以一天花了一万多加拿大元/加币!我都不能想象有这么多钱!她们的生活方式比/和我们普通人这么/很不一样,很入迷人/让人着迷啊!但是,她们四个对彼此之间都/的言行恶毒,常常有戏剧性的事件发生。而且,这个节目的角色用里的人都说的是中文(和英文双语字幕)(I guess,haha),所以这可以说帮我练习锻炼汉语听力……


    Yeah, they live in a totally different world from us.  T_T 

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    March 18, 2016
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    Is this a common expression?
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    March 17, 2016
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    A short question about the meaning of "setting" How much time do you spend practicing in each of the following settings? -Office or private practice -Hospital setting (It is a question for physician. ) Here is my question: What is "setting" means in above interrogative sentence? Thanks in advance.
    March 17, 2016
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    2016年3月15日:晚饭

    我昨天无心情写我的没心情写日记,因为没有什么特别的事情发生了,还有/而且我昨天太累了。
    今天我去了完健身房后,就去(deleted)到一个朋友的房间家里吃饭。这一个个朋友在泰国滑倒/这个朋友在泰国的时候摔倒,然后左脚骨折了,所以我们常常来看她,和帮助她。她给我们看一下了她的脚的X光照片,现在在她的脚里有一些金属棒,我们都觉得这是很酷,哈哈。但是她通过金属探测拱门的时候,探测器会发出嘟嘟声!
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    March 15, 2016
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    2016年3月13日:教书的满足

    昨天早上我必须得去代课因为一个老师来不到了。当然他们一看到我就想了以为我是中国人,但是我已经习惯了,无意识(What do you want to say here?)告诉他们我是英国华侨。与我惯常往常的班不同,这个班又乖又听话。我教了他们一些游戏,他们觉得十分好玩,我们的课一完了该结束时他们还想继续不想停玩游戏。最后,当我们的课终于完了的时候,一个小男孩子(小男孩/男孩子)用英文告诉我,”你教得很好!“这个事件这件事/这个事让我开心了一整天!然后他们问了我下次还会不会教他们(当时他们还问我以后还会不会教他们),很可惜我只可以教他们一次。


    写的不错! 加油!:-)

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    March 13, 2016
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