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Failed in exam of driving car
I failed my driving test!
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0 votedDecember 20, 20170When I'm reading a book in English and run into so many words that I don't understand, it makes me crazy!
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0 votedDecember 20, 20170A Hasty Day
Today the weather is very cold. Later on, I also found out that today would be a very chaotic day. Not only did I get up a late but when I arrived at the subway, I found that I forgot to bring my metro card.Hello! Good job so far. I just corrected the first sentence since I'm quite busy right now. If you need more help, feel free to sign up for a class on writing where I will help you edit your essay for 1 hour!
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0 votedDecember 20, 20170Crime-IELTS
In some counties, some criminal trials in law court are shown on television so that general public can watch. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, certain conviction processes against offenders in some countries can be shown directly on television so that the public can view it. I believe, although there are drawbacks involved, making the trial more transparent is more likely to bring out social benefits. (GOOD!)
First of all, one evident benefit to publishing criminal trials on television is that it would contribute to a more public and transparent judicial system. (GOOD!) Furthermore, the more controversial and the significant the case is, the more likely it would be shown on TV in order to attract people’s attention and reflect public views after the trial. In other words, by implementing national legislation and regulations, the process of conviction against crucial social issues is under the general public’s close supervision as a way to continuously modify its own enforcement.Hello! Good job so far. I just corrected the first sentence since I'm quite busy right now. If you need more help, feel free to sign up for a class on writing where I will help you study for IELTS!
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USA Teacher, Joe
0 votedDecember 20, 20170Resume in English (could any native speaker help to correct my resume please? thx a lot!!)
Objective: Audit intern
Personal Details
Name Xin Hu
Put your birthday instead of your age (if necessary)
Nationality Chinese
Phone (+33)7 68 48 87 13
Email
[email protected]
(教育education!!!)
Self-Assessment
Serious, sense of responsibility, dynamic, communicative.(This is not usually included in a Western C.V.) You need to make this more professional.
Technical Skills
• Familiar with Windows 10 (which windows?)
• Basic functions for Excel, PowerPoint and Word.
• Knowledge ( 不清楚——) of Visual FoxPro.
Hobbies
• Traveled to various countries: Finland, Norway, Belgium, Netherlands, France, Spain, Portugal.
• Dance and outdoor sports.
• Music: Electronic piano, 5 years. (这个不太重要,放在最后面)Hello, I noticed you're looking to apply for an internship. Your C.V. has good information but it is not formatted very professionally to tell you the truth. If you're interested, you can message me and buy a one hour class for C.V. editing where I can help you review your entire C.V. Let me know your WeChat if you have questions.
Thanks,
微信英语老师Joe
0 votedDecember 20, 2017020/12/2018
Today I went to work out for a while at the tennis club, where I signed up for this month. I met a coach who, like me, is Colombian...Hello! Good job so far. I just corrected the first sentence since I'm quite busy right now. If you need more help, feel free to sign up for a class on writing where I will help you edit your essay for 1 hour!
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0 votedDecember 20, 20170Christmas is coming...
Praying a Novena
I have been praying a novena (what is this?) with my neighbors for seven days. There are no men are praying with us right now. There are only women, and almost all of them are more or less 70-years-old.Hello! Good job so far. I just corrected the first sentence since I'm quite busy right now. If you need more help, feel free to sign up for a class on writing where I will help you edit your essay for 1 hour!
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0 votedDecember 20, 20170My Future in the United States
Hello, my name is Isabela and my dream is to one day study in the United States. At the moment, I am living in Brazil...Hello! Good job so far. I just corrected the first sentence since I'm quite busy right now. If you need more help, feel free to sign up for a class on writing where I will help you edit your essay for 1 hour!
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0 votedDecember 20, 20170The Search for Knowledge
Nowadays the knowledge could be likened to treasure. Sometimes, the treasure is hidden. If it's hidden, we must look for it in order to find it. A search is necessary...Hello! Good job so far. I just corrected the first sentence since I'm quite busy right now. If you need more help, feel free to sign up for a class on writing where I will help you edit your essay for 1 hour!
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0 votedDecember 20, 20171A Birthday Cake
。。。(在这儿 At 9:00 am today,)My colleagues gave me a surprise after Decorating our office for Christmas (放在最前面)at around 9 pm today. The surprise was a delicious, beautifully crafted cake. I was so excited. The cake had a colorful pink coating with cartoons on it. It was really cute. ...JOE
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