Resume in English (could any native speaker help to correct my resume please? thx a lot!!)
Objective: Audit intern
Personal Details
Name Xin Hu
Age 23
Nationality Chinese
Phone (+33)7 68 48 87 13
Email
[email protected]
Self-Assessment
Serious, sense of responsibility, dynamic, communicative.
Computers
• Familiar with Windows operating system.
• Basic functions for Excel, PowerPoint and Word.
• Knowledge of Visual FoxPro.
Hobbies
• Traveled to various countries: Finland, Norway, Belgium, Netherlands, France, Spain, Portugal.
• Dance and outdoor sports.
• Music: Electronic piano, 5 years.
Education
Master’s degree in Applied Languages and Intercultural Management Since September 2016
Université de Limoges, France
Main courses: Accounting, social law, marketing, intercultural communication, oral communication and consecutive translation, translation and synthesis of documents
Bachelor’s degree in Modern Literature 2015.09-2016.06 Université de Limoges, France
Bachelor’s degree in French Language 2012.09-2015.06 Xi`an International Studies University, China
Experience
Office assistant 2017.01-2017.07
French Chamber of Commerce and Industry in China
Purchases of office supplies and payments.
Assisted in accounting: expense record.
Translation of documents between French, English and Chinese.
Assisted in Management of the project “Maison France Chine” in contact with partners.
Hostess, interpreter 2015.08
Huaqingchi Hotel Xi'an.
Welcomed foreign guests and interpreting during a wedding.
Internship Coordinator 2014.09-2015.02
New Oriental Education & Technology Group.
Provided leadership in administration, information, advertising.
Facilitated communication across multiple campuses, between intern and staff.
Collection of customer data.
Distribution of campus materials.
Organization of meetings and activities.
Skills
DALF C1 / Advanced Diploma in French Language. (Preparing for level C2)
CET-6 / College English Test-6.
National Computer Rank Examination of Visual FoxPro, 2nd Grade.
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Resume in English (could any native speaker help to correct my resume please? thx a lot!!)
Objective: Audit internPersonal Details
Name Xin Hu
Put your birthday instead of your age (if necessary)
Nationality Chinese
Phone (+33)7 68 48 87 13
[email protected]
(教育education!!!)
Self-Assessment
Serious, sense of responsibility, dynamic, communicative.
(This is not usually included in a Western C.V.) You need to make this more professional.
Technical Skills
• Familiar with Windows 10 (which windows?)
• Basic functions for Excel, PowerPoint and Word.
• Knowledge ( 不清楚——） of Visual FoxPro.
Hobbies
• Traveled to various countries: Finland, Norway, Belgium, Netherlands, France, Spain, Portugal.
• Dance and outdoor sports.
• Music: Electronic piano, 5 years. （这个不太重要，放在最后面）
Hello, I noticed you're looking to apply for an internship. Your C.V. has good information but it is not formatted very professionally to tell you the truth. If you're interested, you can message me and buy a one hour class for C.V. editing where I can help you review your entire C.V. Let me know your WeChat if you have questions.
Thanks,
微信英语老师Joe
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Objective: Audit intern
Personal Details
Name Xin Hu
Age 23
Nationality Chinese
Phone ( 33)7 68 48 87 13
Email
[email protected]
Self-Assessment
Serious,sense of responsibility responsible, dynamic, communicative.
Computer Skills
• Familiar with Windows operating system.
• Basic functions for Excel, PowerPoint and Word.
• Knowledge of Visual FoxPro
Hobbies
• Travelled to various countries: Finland, Norway, Belgium, Netherlands, France, Spain, Portugal.
• Dancing and participating in various outdoor sports.
• Music: Electronic piano, 5 years.
Education
Master’s degree in Applied Languages and Intercultural Management Since September 2016
Université de Limoges, France
Main courses: Accounting, social law, marketing, intercultural communication, oral communication and consecutive translation, translation and synthesis of documents
Bachelor’s degree in Modern Literature 2015.09-2016.06 Université de Limoges, France
Bachelor’s degree in French Language 2012.09-2015.06 Xi`an International Studies University, China
Experience
Office assistant 2017.01-2017.07
French Chamber of Commerce and Industry in China
Purchases of office supplies and payments.
Assisted in accounting: expense record.
Translation of documents between French, English and Chinese.
Assisted in Management of the project “Maison France Chine” in contact with partners.
Hostess, interpreter 2015.08
Huaqingchi Hotel Xi'an.
Welcomed foreign guests and interpreting during a wedding.
Internship Coordinator 2014.09-2015.02
New Oriental Education & Technology Group.
Provided leadership in administration, information, advertising.
Facilitated communication across multiple campuses, between intern and staff.
Collection of customer data.
Distribution of campus materials.
Organization of meetings and activities.
Skills
DALF C1 / Advanced Diploma in French Language. (Preparing for level C2)
CET-6 / College English Test-6.
National Computer Rank Examination of Visual FoxPro, 2nd Grade.
Personal Details
Name Xin Hu
Age 23
Nationality Chinese
Phone ( 33)7 68 48 87 13
[email protected]
Self-Assessment
Serious,
Computer Skills
• Familiar with Windows operating system.
• Basic functions for Excel, PowerPoint and Word.
• Knowledge of Visual FoxPro
Hobbies
• Travelled to various countries: Finland, Norway, Belgium, Netherlands, France, Spain, Portugal.
• Dancing and participating in various outdoor sports.
• Music: Electronic piano, 5 years.
Education
Master’s degree in Applied Languages and Intercultural Management Since September 2016
Université de Limoges, France
Main courses: Accounting, social law, marketing, intercultural communication, oral communication and consecutive translation, translation and synthesis of documents
Bachelor’s degree in Modern Literature 2015.09-2016.06 Université de Limoges, France
Bachelor’s degree in French Language 2012.09-2015.06 Xi`an International Studies University, China
Experience
Office assistant 2017.01-2017.07
French Chamber of Commerce and Industry in China
Purchases of office supplies and payments.
Assisted in accounting: expense record.
Translation of documents between French, English and Chinese.
Assisted in Management of the project “Maison France Chine” in contact with partners.
Hostess, interpreter 2015.08
Huaqingchi Hotel Xi'an.
Welcomed foreign guests and interpreting during a wedding.
Internship Coordinator 2014.09-2015.02
New Oriental Education & Technology Group.
Provided leadership in administration, information, advertising.
Facilitated communication across multiple campuses, between intern and staff.
Collection of customer data.
Distribution of campus materials.
Organization of meetings and activities.
Skills
DALF C1 / Advanced Diploma in French Language. (Preparing for level C2)
CET-6 / College English Test-6.
National Computer Rank Examination of Visual FoxPro, 2nd Grade.
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Thanks for your advice Bernhard! i like german people haha
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Apart from this issue, I think your curriculum is quite ok, from a German point of view. There are significant differences between some countires like Germany, France, Great Britain, USA, Japan etc. how to structure the application documents and what informations to include. So you should adjust style and contents to the country of the person to whom the application is addressed. But you should find plenty of intformation in internet.
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Maybe it's too late now but I think you should not put so many personal informations on a public place like this... except you have changed them before. Then you can ignore this message. ;))
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