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            总而言之，婴儿安全岛当然不能解决抛弃孩子的问题，因为为了解决这么严重的问题要求政府提高福利的经费。但是如果社会想进先照顾孩子们，父母根本不能照顾自己的孩子，开婴儿安全岛就是最重好（？有效）的办法，因为要让孩子有最快乐的童年。在笔者看来如果澳大利亚的抛弃儿童的数量继续增多，为了我们国家的孩子最好福利院（最好）开始有（开设）婴儿安全岛。

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    “婴儿安全岛”的现象

            为了写这篇文章（在这篇文章中），我选的话提（话题）是现在很严重与（并具有）争议性的社会问题：怎么管理抛弃（被弃    NOTE：抛弃 is activitive, 被弃 is passive）儿童的问题，也就是说“婴儿安全岛”的现象。根据普通的人的想法，乍看抛弃儿童的现象就很容易设想这些儿童的父母就是狠心与残酷的人，然而理解这个情况没有那么简单。在这篇文章中，首先我想介绍在中国与澳洲（的）父母抛弃儿童的缘由。（I think it is better to substitute 。 for ； here.）第二，我想评论这两个国家对这个社会问题的政策反应，就是“婴儿安全岛”的现象。（；）最后我要自己剖解这个情况，表达我自己的简介看法/观点。
            由于不同的文化背景与生活条件，在中国与澳洲抛弃孩子有不一样的因素。在中国，现在抛弃新生婴儿大多是由于病残的原因。中国残疾人网站的资料说明中国有817.35万残疾儿童，并且根据一项于2014年发表的UNICEF调查表明，百分之60的残疾孩子从来没有受到（过）政府的生活福利。在澳大利亚，抛弃婴儿有两个主要的原因：由于母亲受到精神疾病，特别是产后忧郁症的影响。第二个原因就是年轻母亲受到家庭和社会的限制，于是她们感觉不会照顾婴儿。
            最近在澳洲悉尼有一些关于抛弃婴儿臭名昭彰的罪案，这些事件让社会开始讨论怎么管理抛弃孩子的问题。2014年11月30号时，在悉尼东南区的Maroubra沙滩两个男孩子在沙子下发现了男婴的尸体，原来男婴被母亲抛弃在沙滩上。 这件事受到福利院的批评，于是新南威尔士州府正在酝酿“婴儿安全岛”，看国外试办的例子（can't understand this sentence?）。
            为了保护这些抛弃（被弃）儿童，中国湖北省的政府宣布新的别致（特别）政策，。（can't understand why you change another city. 湖北省 is a province in China while 石家庄is a city in 河北HEIBEI province in China.）在石家庄市2011年6月时开放大陆第一个“婴儿安全岛”，在地区福利院的外面有一套特殊的房间，里面有一张童床与监视器。父母一抛弃孩子就马上拉警报，福利院的职工就来照顾抛弃的儿童。
          从越来越多开“婴儿安全岛”的情况产生以来，这是最近（在）论坛上引起剧烈的争论的问题。据广州市民政局网站消息声称该婴儿岛在启用15天后就接收79名弃婴。这样不但增速惊人而（惊人的增长速度）超过了接受（收）能力，于是地区福利院不得不暂停试点。这份资料技能说明问题，有的人（会使人）觉得婴儿安全岛会助长父母抛弃儿童。这是一面之词，反对的人觉得开“婴儿安全岛”对社会有很多好处（I think it will be sound if you illustrate some benefits.）。至于残疾儿童的医疗保健，普通人一般负担不起，于是为了儿童的福利，在安全岛抛弃孩子肯定是最好的办法（ I think this is a weird idea because the government can offer more policies for disabled children）。


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    Spring is bad for me This spring I have got three difficulties. The first one is I have not got any emails from the University I am applying for which frustrated me a lot. The second one is I have not chose a dissertation topic while others starting writing which has disturbed me since 10 March. The third one is that I have took with insomnia these days and meanwhile I tossed and turned with worry in bed. I think depression is a product of this upsetting spring.
    April 4, 2016
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    Recent trifles These days I have been to write letters of recommendation, which stressed me out. Writing judgements to oneself is one of things I am not good at. Sometimes I think the self is the only entitled one to evaluate himself, but sometimes it is weird for me to make comments on myself because I can not assess ego as a bystander. As to others, they even do not realise my inner self from my showed characteristics. Yesterday I saw a movie, Irrational Man. I think Woody Allen is not a director who tend to drag deeper in human beings, he just state the facts, how could this thing be running and sometimes murder is his usual ploy. So compared with other movies which put more attention on deeper and profound human nature, Woody Allen is not my best choice.
    March 31, 2016
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    Jotting on 28 February Today I went to five book stores for buying cheaper books with a friend who's knowledgable. After that, we went to Peking University and national library of China which making me exhausted.
    February 28, 2016
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    Today's activities Putting most of my time on applying for an one-year taught programma of UCB today, my next step is to draft a personal statement which frustrated me a lot. I tend to think the thing I am doing is in vain because neither any research programs I participated like other applicants nor advanced writing capacity assuring admission committee that I am an outstanding student. Those two advantages making me get discouraged and feel depressed. At the same time, here is a new finding about myself, i.e. there are few ways for me to release from the pressures of life. I used to read comics or browse microblog but now I think they are merely consequences of unconstructive procrastination. I plan to do yogas as a solution of facing stessful things.
    February 25, 2016
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    我們的學期開始囉！:)

    大家好，

    今天我們學校開學的第一天，有非常多的工作要我要（要，这句有两种写法：1.有非常多的工作要我做。2.有非常多的工作我要做。要我要做是重复。 The sentence you can write in following two ways, a)有非常多的工作要我做 b)有非常多的工作我要做  要我要做is synonym. Forgive me if I'm wrong in the expression in English and hope you correct it if you don't mind. Thx for that.）做。有時候我覺得我忙得一點業餘時間都沒有。
    我當老師之前曾經做過一些自由翻譯的工作，還在一所私立公司當總经理助手。當時我認為工作壓力太大，受不了，所以決定好（好）跳槽，做一份較輕鬆的工作：（：，用——破折号，中文里有所指向用：或者——，但：多数出现在谁说什么之后，句中用：少见，不如用——. I think it's better to represent by a dash rather than by a colon. Colon appearing  in the middle of the sentence is not common unless it gets following " " which for quotation of others.）就是當老師。

    不過沒想到當老師會(會）讓我更忙，害我沒有一點減輕壓力的時間。我覺得太可惜啦！:/

    你們中間也有當老師的嗎？你們同不同意我的想法？
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    February 16, 2016
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    Jottings on 16 Feb.2016 Last night I wrote my course paper but still doesn't finish. I read others' doctoral dissertations for inspiring me to offer points and meanwhile polish my rhetoric. Stressing.
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