My SNS routine

Notes:

- This was very well written and your key points were easy to understand

- In the section: "Some people I followed..." I changed this to present tense. This is because you wrote at the start, "In the morning," followed by "usually" - so it is assumed that the action is still presently ongoing.

(15th January, 2016)

I woke up at twenty past nine, had breakfast, and watched the TV series "Friends" (in EN). After that I looked through the social network went on social media then I listened to "Ensemble Khan Bogd", "Don Robertson ", and "White Noise." and I did the housework after New Years holidays. After that I tryed tried to listen listened to "Euronews"(in EN), but I can't nothing couldn't understand anything. I then I learned studied English to up until 5 p.m. At half past five I went to English classes before going to my English class at half past five. On the street it was foggy and warm (<em>alternatively</em>: Along the way, I noticed that the street was foggy and warm). On English classes During class, we learned about Present Perfect time. When I went While on my way home on the street colder and I'm frozen.  it was getting so cold that I was about to freeze. After English classes When I finally arrived, I then cooked diner dinner. At nine o'clock I watched to the TV show "What? Where? When?" I went to bed before 11 p.m. before going to bed at around 11pm.

This is a good start! You listed things well in chronological order. Here's a tip for you: it's good to also expand on the tasks that you noted by describing them more and including some other interesting things.

E.g. "<em style="color: #800000;">During class, we learned about Present Perfect time</em>" you can expand by adding, "<em style="color: #800000;">It was difficult to learn because English is not my second language but I will make sure to work on it before my next class.</em>" Hope this helps!

Reading foreign book is fun

In Japan there are no chance to speak English.
There are many Japanese. Few people speak English.
But when we go abroad, we can't speak.
Cause we study English in class, we have fear to mistake.
That prevent us English well.

Reading foreign books is fun. 

In Japan, there aren't many chances to speak English. There are many Japanese people but only a few can speak English. When we go abroad, it's difficult for us to speak because we study English in class and we have a fear of making mistakes. That prevents us from speaking English well.