(15th January, 2016)

I woke up at twenty past nine, had breakfast, and watched the TV series "Friends" (in EN). After that I looked through the social network went on social media then I listened to "Ensemble Khan Bogd", "Don Robertson ", and "White Noise." and I did the housework after New Years holidays. After that I tryed tried to listen listened to "Euronews"(in EN), but I can't nothing couldn't understand anything. I then I learned studied English to up until 5 p.m. At half past five I went to English classes before going to my English class at half past five. On the street it was foggy and warm (alternatively: Along the way, I noticed that the street was foggy and warm). On English classes During class, we learned about Present Perfect time. When I went While on my way home on the street colder and I'm frozen.  it was getting so cold that I was about to freeze. After English classes When I finally arrived, I then cooked diner dinner. At nine o'clock I watched to the TV show "What? Where? When?" I went to bed before 11 p.m. before going to bed at around 11pm.

This is a good start! You listed things well in chronological order. Here's a tip for you: it's good to also expand on the tasks that you noted by describing them more and including some other interesting things.

E.g. "During class, we learned about Present Perfect time" you can expand by adding, "It was difficult to learn because English is not my second language but I will make sure to work on it before my next class." Hope this helps!

(15th January, 2016)

I woke up at twenty past nine, had breakfast and watched the TV series "Friends" (in EN). After that I looked through the social network. Then I listened to "Ensemble Khan Bogd", "Don Robertson ", "White Noise" and I did the housework after New Year's holidays. After that I tried to listen* to "Euronews"(in EN), but I could understand nothing. Then I learned English to 5 p.m. At half past five I went to English classes. On the street it was foggy and warm. In the English classes we learned present perfect tenses. When I went home the street got colder and I got frozen. After English classes I cooked dinner. At nine o'clock I watched to the TV show "What? Where? When?" I went to bed before 11 p.m.

*or, tried listening to..