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My SNS routine I log into my Instagram account about twice a day. By using it, I stay in touch with the friends I care about and share information. In the morning, I usually check my timeline for exercise. Some people I followed upload their daily exercise routine. Following just a few poses they recommended can make me stay healthy. Also, for cooking I spend lots of time on Instagram. I search a recipe using a hash tag. Let's take an example. If I want to make a meal with blueberry, just search blueberry with a pound key before the word. I sometimes post my recipe and the pictures. Using SNS too much is, of course, just wasting time. But it is very helpful to me.

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My SNS routine

I log into my Instagram account about twice a day. By using it, I'm able to stay in touch with the friends I care about and share information.

In the morning, I usually check my timeline for exercise posts. Some people I followed upload their daily exercise routine. Following just a few poses exercises ("poses" doesn't seem right here. Suggest: "exercises") they recommended can make help me stay healthy.
Also, for cooking I spend lots of time on Instagram. I search a recipe using a hash tag. Let's take an For example: If I want to make a meal with blueberry blueberries, I just search blueberries with a pound hash key before the word. I sometimes post my own recipes and the with my pictures.

Using SNS too much is, of course, just wasting time (suggest: "just a waste of time" it flows more nicely). But Having said that, it is still very helpful to me (suggest end: "when used in moderation").

Notes:

- This was very well written and your key points were easy to understand

- In the section: "Some people I followed..." I changed this to present tense. This is because you wrote at the start, "In the morning," followed by "usually" - so it is assumed that the action is still presently ongoing.


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