去餐聽！

大家好！ 好耐無寫咗一個notebook entry. 我而家幾忙不過都想學多啲廣東話。 我想買一新學廣東話笨書。你地呢？我而家要走啦因為同屋企人去餐聽食飯。如果你有興趣你何以俾我message...!

If I write...

去餐厅！

大家好！好耐无写一个notebook entry。我宜家几忙，不过都想学多D广东话。我想买一本新嘅学广东话嘅书。你地呢？

我宜家要走啦，因为要同屋企人去餐厅食饭。如果你有兴趣，可以俾信息我...!

每天我被韩语的作业追了（what do you mean? this is a wrong sentence.）

每天我被韩语的作业追了
我想(add"去")韩国旅游。（use"，"will be better）但是学习的路程很远。
二月十号晚上九点左(add "右”)在（我会到，as one sentence need subject"我" and predicate“到”）上海火车站的窗口，取票要大概多长时间？
我很担心很多人的排列。  （排队）
外国人不可以用自动售票机取票。我觉得很痛苦。

If I wirte, will like this:

我想去韩国旅游，但是路程很远。

我会在二月十号九点左右到上海火车站的窗口取票，但不知道大概多长时间。

我很担心很多人排队。

外国不可以用自动售票机取票的规定让我觉得很痛苦。

Correct

Wǒ de jiào shiKieran， hé wǒ shi sū gé lán rén . Xiàn zài (mù qián ) （Xiàn zài =mù qián，they are the same means.so just need just one）wǒ qǐ tú(“cháng shì” will be better) xué shuō zhōng wén . Píng sù měi tiān wǒ xué xí yī ge xiǎo shí (better sequence is “wǒ tōng cháng měi tiān xué xí yī ge xiǎo shí” ，tōng cháng=normally). Wǒ xué xí le zhǐ （add “yǒu”）sān ge yué （yuè）. Wǒ xiǎng xué yīn wèi míng nián wǒ yào dào zhōng guó qù . Wǒ hái dǎ suan （suàn）xué kàn hàn zì jiù (yǐ biàn，= so that) wǒ huì kàn zì zhōng guó lì shǐ hē zhé xué . Lǎo shí shuō wǒ bú （bù）xiǎng xuě （add“xiě”，xiě=write）hàn zì yīn wèi wǒ xiǎng tài náng （nán）hé yào hěn cháng shí diān （jiān）.

Wǒ shi sū gé lán rén kě shi wǒ gēn wǒ de bà ba, mā ma, gē ge, liǎng ge mèi mei wǒ men lái zài Jiān （Jiā）ná dà dāng wǒ shí èr suì de （add “shí hòu”）. Xiàn zài wǒ zhù zài Mò xī gē jiù néng liàn xí shuō Xī bān yá yǔ yiě （yě）zì xué zhōng wén . Wǒ shì gōng chéng shī , wǒ gěi Jiān （Jiā）ná dà gōng sī gōng zuò kě shì wǒ zài jiā li zài Mò xī gē gōng zuò .

Dāng wǒ yǒu shí jiān de shí hou（hòu）, wǒ xǐ huan xué xí yǔ yán , kàn shū , lü3 xíng , hé wǒ de péng yǒu yì qǐ liàn xí wǔ shù . wǒ rèn wéi xué xí guó jiā hé yǔyán shì fēi cháng fēng fù de.

This is what I'm trying to say :)

My name is Kieran and I'm from Scotland. I am currently trying to learn to speak Chinese. I normally study for one hour every day. I have only been learning for 3 months. I want to learn because I want to go to China next year. I also hope to learn to read Chinese characters so that I can read about Chinese history and philosophy. The truth is that I don't want to learn to write because I think it will be too difficult and take too long.

I was born in Scotland but I moved to Canada when I was 12 years old with my parents, older brother, and two younger sisters. Now I live in Mexico so that I can practice speaking Spanish while teaching myself Chinese. I work as a mechanical engineer for a Canadian company but I work from home in Mexico.

When I have time, I love to study languages, read, travel, and practice martial arts with my friends. I think learning about many different countries and languages is very enriching.