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I wanna want to talk with anyone with in English and help anyone to learn Chinese
Hello!
I am Sue from China, and talk frequently in Chinese I speak Mandarin and Cantonese. If anyone wants to learn Mandarin or Cantonese, I am willing to help. Meantime Meanwhile, I want to exercise practice my spoken English. Aim at frequently speaking I would like to speak English frequently.
come one Please feel free to contact me.
I am looking forward to talk speaking with everyone.
Best regards.
Sue
Nice job! Feel free to ask any questions you may have!
I wanna (want to) talk with anyone with English and help anyone to learn Chinese (I would like to practice english and in exchange I can help you with Chinese)
Hello!
I am Sue and I'm from China, I talk frequently speak Chinese mandarin and cantonese. If anyone want to learn mandarin or cantonese, I am willing to help it. Meantime, I want to exercise my spoken English (I want to practice my english conversation), Aim at frequently speaking English.(?) my goal is speak english fluently.
come one (come on, but it's better say "please"... =>> avoid to use slang<<=), contact me.
Looking forward to talk with everyone.
Best regards
Sue
Green - correction
Red - erase
Blue - suggestions to make your text better
Light Blue - strong advice! Please don't use C'mon, wanna, gonna, ain't in your texts. In general you shouldn't use slang!
Hello Sue! how are u? I hope I've helped you with this corrections and suggestions! =D
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