Wǒ jiào  Kieran ,wǒ shì sū gé lán rén (我叫Kieran,我是苏格兰人）. Xiàn zài (mù qián ) wǒ xiang (or zhunbèi,"qitú"sometime means a little malicious) xué shuō hàn yu (say "hanyu"  ,write "zhong wen" ) （目前我想学说汉语）. Píng shí měi tiān wǒ xué xí yí ge xiǎo shí (平时每天我学习一个小时） . Wǒ zhi xué xí le  sān ge yuè (我只学习了三个月）. Wǒ xiǎng xué han yu yīn wèi míng nián wǒ yào dào zhōng guó qù (我想学汉语因为明年我要到中国去）. Wǒ hái dǎ suan xué kàn hàn zì nà yàng("na yang " means "so that") wǒ jìu  huì kàn dong  zhōng guó dè lì shǐ hē zhé xué le .(我还打算学看汉字，那样我就会看懂中国的历史和哲学了） Lǎo shi shuō wǒ bú xiǎng xuě hàn zì yīn wèi wǒ jué de tài nán le ,ér qie yào fù chū  hěn cháng shí diān . (老实说我不想学汉字因为我觉得太难了，而且要付出很长时间。）

Wǒ shì sū gé lán rén kě shi dāng wo shí èr suì de shí ,wǒ gēn wǒ de bà ba, mā ma, gē ge, liǎng ge mèi mei wǒ men  qu le jā ná dà .(我是苏格兰人，可是当我十二岁时，我跟我的爸爸、妈妈、哥哥，两个妹妹我们去了加拿大） Xiàn zài wǒ zhù zài Mò xī gē jiù néng liàn xí shuō Xī bān yá yǔ le (现在我住在墨西哥就能练习西班牙语了）wo  ye zì xué zhōng wén (我也自学中文）. Wǒ shì gōng chéng shī ,（我是工程师） wǒ wèi jiā ná dà gōng sī gōng zuò kě shì wǒ zài mò xī gē dè jiā li bàn gōng . (我为加拿大的公司工作，可是我在墨西哥的家里办公）

Dāng wǒ yǒu shí jiān de shí hou,（当我有时间的时候） wǒ xǐ huan xué xí yǔ yán ,（我喜欢学习语言） kàn shū ,（看书） lü xíng ,（旅行） hé wǒ de péng yǒu yì qǐ liàn xí wǔ shù . （和我的朋友一起练习武术）wǒ rènwéi xuéxí bù tóng guó jiā dè wén huà hé yǔyán ràng wo dè shēng huó fēi cháng chōng shí . (我认为学习不同国家的文化和语言让我的生活非常充实）

ni dè zhōng wén shì zì xué dè mā ? zhen dè hen bú cuò!^_^

This is what I'm trying to say :)

My name is Kieran and I'm from Scotland. I am currently trying to learn to speak Chinese. I normally study for one hour every day. I have only been learning for 3 months. I want to learn because I want to go to China next year. I also hope to learn to read Chinese characters so that I can read about Chinese history and philosophy. The truth is that I don't want to learn to write because I think it will be too difficult and take too long.

I was born in Scotland but I moved to Canada when I was 12 years old with my parents, older brother, and two younger sisters. Now I live in Mexico so that I can practice speaking Spanish while teaching myself Chinese. I work as a mechanical engineer for a Canadian company but I work from home in Mexico.

When I have time, I love to study languages, read, travel, and practice martial arts with my friends. I think learning about many different countries and languages is very enriching.

Correct

Wǒ de jiào shiKieran， hé wǒ shi sū gé lán rén . Xiàn zài (mù qián ) （Xiàn zài =mù qián，they are the same means.so just need just one）wǒ qǐ tú(“cháng shì” will be better) xué shuō zhōng wén . Píng sù měi tiān wǒ xué xí yī ge xiǎo shí (better sequence is “wǒ tōng cháng měi tiān xué xí yī ge xiǎo shí” ，tōng cháng=normally). Wǒ xué xí le zhǐ （add “yǒu”）sān ge yué （yuè）. Wǒ xiǎng xué yīn wèi míng nián wǒ yào dào zhōng guó qù . Wǒ hái dǎ suan （suàn）xué kàn hàn zì jiù (yǐ biàn，= so that) wǒ huì kàn zì zhōng guó lì shǐ hē zhé xué . Lǎo shí shuō wǒ bú （bù）xiǎng xuě （add“xiě”，xiě=write）hàn zì yīn wèi wǒ xiǎng tài náng （nán）hé yào hěn cháng shí diān （jiān）.

Wǒ shi sū gé lán rén kě shi wǒ gēn wǒ de bà ba, mā ma, gē ge, liǎng ge mèi mei wǒ men lái zài Jiān （Jiā）ná dà dāng wǒ shí èr suì de （add “shí hòu”）. Xiàn zài wǒ zhù zài Mò xī gē jiù néng liàn xí shuō Xī bān yá yǔ yiě （yě）zì xué zhōng wén . Wǒ shì gōng chéng shī , wǒ gěi Jiān （Jiā）ná dà gōng sī gōng zuò kě shì wǒ zài jiā li zài Mò xī gē gōng zuò .

Dāng wǒ yǒu shí jiān de shí hou（hòu）, wǒ xǐ huan xué xí yǔ yán , kàn shū , lü3 xíng , hé wǒ de péng yǒu yì qǐ liàn xí wǔ shù . wǒ rèn wéi xué xí guó jiā hé yǔyán shì fēi cháng fēng fù de.

This is what I'm trying to say :)

My name is Kieran and I'm from Scotland. I am currently trying to learn to speak Chinese. I normally study for one hour every day. I have only been learning for 3 months. I want to learn because I want to go to China next year. I also hope to learn to read Chinese characters so that I can read about Chinese history and philosophy. The truth is that I don't want to learn to write because I think it will be too difficult and take too long.

I was born in Scotland but I moved to Canada when I was 12 years old with my parents, older brother, and two younger sisters. Now I live in Mexico so that I can practice speaking Spanish while teaching myself Chinese. I work as a mechanical engineer for a Canadian company but I work from home in Mexico.

When I have time, I love to study languages, read, travel, and practice martial arts with my friends. I think learning about many different countries and languages is very enriching.

My personal introduction in Chinese

Hi everyone! This is my first try to write produce anything in Chinese. I would appreciate if someone could correct what I wrote as I know it is very bad and I want to practice saying this once I have a correct version. Thanks!

Wǒ jiào Kieran ，wǒ shi sū gé lán rén . Xiàn zài (mù qián ) wǒ  xiang xue shuō zhōng wén . Píng shi měi tiān wǒ xué xí yī ge xiǎo shí . Wǒ xué xí le sān ge yué . Wǒ xiǎng xué Zhongwen yīn wèi míng nián wǒ Xiang  dào zhōng guó qù . Wǒ hái dǎ suan xué xi hàn zì ,wǒ ke yi kan zhōng guó lì shǐ hē zhé xué . Lǎo shí shuō wǒ bú xiǎng xuě xie hàn zì yīn wèi wǒ xiǎng tài nan hé yào hěn cháng shí  jian.

Wǒ shi sū gé lán rén kě shi wǒ gēn wǒ de bà ba, mā ma, gē ge, liǎng ge mèi mei wǒ men ban dao Jiān ná dà dāng wǒ shí èr suì de. Xiàn zài wǒ zhù zài Mò xī gē jiù néng liàn xí shuō Xī bān yá yǔ ye zì xué zhōng wén . Wǒ shì gōng chéng shī , wǒ gěi Jiān ná dà gōng sī gōng zuò kě shì wǒ zài jiā li zài Mò xī gē gōng zuò .

Dāng wǒ yǒu shí jiān de shí hou, wǒ xǐ huan xué xí yǔ yán , kàn shū , lu xíng , hé wǒ de péng yǒu yì qǐ liàn xí wǔ shù . wǒ rènwéi xuéxí duo guó jiā de yǔyán shì fēicháng fēngfù de.

This is what I'm trying to say :)

My name is Kieran and I'm from Scotland. I am currently trying to learn to speak Chinese. I normally study for one hour every day. I have only been learning for 3 months. I want to learn because I want to go to China next year. I also hope to learn to read Chinese characters so that I can read about Chinese history and philosophy. The truth is that I don't want to learn to write because I think it will be too difficult and take too long.

I was born in Scotland but I moved to Canada when I was 12 years old with my parents, older brother, and two younger sisters. Now I live in Mexico so that I can practice speaking Spanish while teaching myself Chinese. I work as a mechanical engineer for a Canadian company but I work from home in Mexico.

When I have time, I love to study languages, read, travel, and practice martial arts with my friends. I think learning about many different countries and languages is very enriching.

My personal introduction in Chinese

Hi everyone! This is my first try to write produce anything in Chinese. I would appreciate if someone could correct what I wrote as I know it is very bad and I want to practice saying this once I have a correct version. Thanks!

Wǒ de jiào shi Kieran hé wǒ shi sū gé lán rén . Xiàn zài (mù qián ) wǒ  xué shuō zhōng wén . Píng shi měi tiān wǒ xué xí yī ge xiǎo shí . Wǒ xué xí le  sān ge yué . Wǒ xiǎng xué yīn wèi míng nián wǒ yào dào zhōng guó qù . Wǒ hái dǎ suan xué kàn hàn zì jiù wǒ huì kàn zì zhōng guó lì shǐ hē zhé xué . Lǎo shí shuō wǒ bú xiǎng xuě hàn zì yīn wèi wǒ xiǎng tài náng hé yào hěn cháng shí jiān .

Wǒ shi sū gé lán rén kě shi dang wǒ shí èr suì de shí hou, wǒ gēn wǒ de bà ba, mā ma, gē ge, he liǎng ge mèi mei qu le Jiā ná dà. Xiàn zài wǒ zhù zài Mò xī gē jiù néng liàn xí shuō Xī bān yá yǔ yiě zì xué zhōng wén . Wǒ shì gōng chéng shī , wǒ gěi Jiā ná dà gōng sī gōng zuò kě shì wǒ zài jiā li zài Mò xī gē gōng zuò .

Dāng wǒ yǒu shí jiān de shí hou, wǒ xǐ huan xué xí yǔ yán , kàn shū , lü xíng , hé wǒ de péng yǒu yì qǐ liàn xí wǔ shù . wǒ rènwéi xuéxí guó jiā Dé yǔyán shì fēicháng fēngfù de.

This is what I'm trying to say :)

My name is Kieran and I'm from Scotland. I am currently trying to learn to speak Chinese. I normally study for one hour every day. I have only been learning for 3 months. I want to learn because I want to go to China next year. I also hope to learn to read Chinese characters so that I can read about Chinese history and philosophy. The truth is that I don't want to learn to write because I think it will be too difficult and take too long.

I was born in Scotland but I moved to Canada when I was 12 years old with my parents, older brother, and two younger sisters. Now I live in Mexico so that I can practice speaking Spanish while teaching myself Chinese. I work as a mechanical engineer for a Canadian company but I work from home in Mexico.

When I have time, I love to study languages, read, travel, and practice martial arts with my friends. I think learning about many different countries and languages is very enriching.