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One of the way<s>s</s> to fight <s>with</s> overpopulation
is through the
laws and policies which <s>will</s> are aimed <s>on</s> at
birth control. With such a program nations will be able to
maintain a healthy number of people. At
the same time these people will get <s>more</s> higher quality
lives as they will not experience problems of overpopulation. Despite the fact
that many people think that these measures are immoral, <s>actually
it</s> they will drastically change the situation we
are facing right now. Another way to deal with this issue is not to control
population, but rather to explore and develop new areas, which would allow
people to grow more food and make more space for themselves in
which to
live. Scientific progress would also help the situation, as it may solve the
problem with environmental pollution.
Essay #193 "The Problem of Overpopulation" 29.07.18
Over recent decades with the development of medicine and overall technological progress people were have been given an the opportunity to live much longer and happier lives. As a result, the population of the earth have been has increased significantly. This situation has lead to some major problems of in our era, such as environmental pollution, scarcity of water supplies, famine and the shortage of energy resources.Some Yoga stuff
Hello!Not many mistakes; it looks as though you wrote this quite quickly - so you have not forgotten as much English as you say you think you have in your other piece!
Also, it has had a huge effect on the people’s
approach to education, (full stop) Nowadays, (no comma) you
can get all sorts of classes or courses from at home sitting
in front of a computer screen. It has become
a standard practice and is not considered as
some alien technology, but as a reasonable evolution of education. Thus, (no comma) it
can be
a substitute for classical education and
create an absolutely new educational system that could enhance and even excel supercede the
current one.
To conclude, the development in of the IT
sphere has already brought given rise to many
useful features and created had a
very positive effect on the world. And in future it will maintain the
same route continue
in the same direction and with the a constantly
increasing level of influence on our society. Thus, (no comma) suspicions to that of this technology
are based on prejudices and backward thinking and not on some reasonable
statements, (full
stop) So IT development has already affected our
society in a positive way and will proceed continue to do
so in future.
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Yet another good essay! You use punctuation like a Russian! English has slightly different rules. I can tell that you think hard about articles, but some mistakes slip through.But the most important thing is that your arguments are consistent and clearly set out.
Just keep going and you will continue to improve.
Essay #81 "IT Technology" 08.04.18
The Development of the internet technology is one of the most prominent features of last recent decades. However, some people think that despite its positive initial effect in future it will affect our society only in a bad way. But, (no comma) in my opinion, (no comma) it this is not true and IT will only increase its positive influence and change an everyday life to for the better.Peer pressure
I'm from Russia, and we have a lot of peer pressure here. One of the most shining examples is that almost everyone (especially elderly people) cares concern themselves about other's private life. For example, if you are a young single woman in your mid-twenties, you will regularly get questions about your marriage and children plans, which is very annoying. I consider this kind of people's behavior very rude and bothersome, because respecting others' (possession in plural is indicated by an apostrophe after the 's' - a very annoying little detail!) private life lives is very important to me, so I can't stand it when people don't respect mine.Very fluent English.
Peer pressure exists everywhere, but it takes on a new meaning in Russia!
To conclude, the arts are an important part of people’s development and have a great influence on live the life of our society. However, the government should solve real problems first and then tackle apply itself into enhancing the artistic life of a the country. By doing so it could drastically improve live the (quality of) life of our community and as a result make more people interested in the arts as they will have fewer everyday problems.<o:p></o:p>
* The Arts (arts) as a general concept is plural and they take the definite article<o:p></o:p>
** 2nd conditional
You show amazing diligence in producing these essays! (Apologies for the strange way of uploading the corrections. I couldn't see any other way of doing it)
Well done!
Also, in our extremely highly technological era age people
have an access
to a huge amount variety of
entertainments, so even if the government would did not provide
people with it them,
they would** find
a way to compensate for the lack of art events it by
themselves. But they cannot compensate for flaws in public
transportation and utility services. So the government should revise the distribution
of a the budget,
set the right priorities and devise a more public-oriented policy.
Despite the importance
of arts in people’s lives it takes a back seat to everyday needs. Thus, by
investing into the* arts
instead of solving real problems the government not only makes the lives
of people who are affected more challenging, but also these problems do not let allow them
to appreciate governmental efforts on arts development. Basically, this
strategy makes the lives
of people who suffer from poor utility services more complicated and those who
are not better off by
providing them with more entertainments.
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Essay #74 "Arts and Utility Services" 01.04.18
Artistic development and education are highly important for modern people in order to become accomplished members of society. However, some think that governmental investments into this sphere (at the moment) (can be omitted)is not a very thoughtful well-thought-out decision, and I have to agree with this. In my opinion, regardless its of their importance the* arts should take second place to public services.
