Essay #74 "Arts and Utility Services" 01.04.18
Artistic development and education are highly important for modern people in order to become accomplished members of society. However, some think that governmental investments into this sphere is not a very well-thought-out decision, and I have to agree with this. In my opinion, regardless of their importance the arts should take second place to public services.
Nowadays, our society has many problems with the quality of social services and the government should concentrate its efforts on this. These issues create real problems for people and the government cannot just ignore them. If there were more budget allocations to improving public services it would have a much more positive effect on the community than building new arts venues and organizing events.
Also, in our highly technological age people have an access to a huge variety of entertainments, so even if the government would not provide people with them, they would find a way to compensate for the lack of art events by themselves. But they cannot compensate for flaws in public transportation and utility services. So the government should revise the distribution of the budget, set the right priorities and devise a more public-oriented policy.
Despite the importance of arts in people’s lives it takes a back seat to everyday needs. Thus, by investing in the arts instead of solving real problems the government not only makes the lives of people who are affected more challenging, but also these problems do not allow them to appreciate governmental efforts on arts development. Basically, this strategy makes the lives of people who suffer from poor utility services more complicated and those who are not better off by providing them with more entertainments.
To conclude, the arts are an important part of people’s development and have a great influence on the life of our society. However, the government should solve real problems first and then tackle apply itself into enhancing the artistic life of the country. By doing so it could drastically improve live of our community and as a result make more people interested in the arts as they will have fewer everyday problems.
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To conclude, the arts are an important
part of people’s development and have a great influence on live the life of
our society. However, the government should solve real problems first and then tackle apply itself into
enhancing the artistic
life of a the country.
By doing so it could drastically improve live the (quality of) life of
our community and as a result make more people interested in the arts
as they will have fewer everyday problems.
* The
Arts (arts) as a general concept is plural and they take the definite article
** 2nd conditional
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Also, in our extremely highly technological era age people
have an access
to a huge amount variety of
entertainments, so even if the government would did not provide
people with it them,
they would** find
a way to compensate for the lack of art events it by
themselves. But they cannot compensate for flaws in public
transportation and utility services. So the government should revise the distribution
of a the budget,
set the right priorities and devise a more public-oriented policy.
Despite the importance
of arts in people’s lives it takes a back seat to everyday needs. Thus, by
investing into the* arts
instead of solving real problems the government not only makes the lives
of people who are affected more challenging, but also these problems do not let allow them
to appreciate governmental efforts on arts development. Basically, this
strategy makes the lives
of people who suffer from poor utility services more complicated and those who
are not better off by
providing them with more entertainments.
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Essay #74 "Arts and Utility Services" 01.04.18
Artistic development and education are highly important for modern people in order to become accomplished members of society. However, some think that governmental investments into this sphere (at the moment) (can be omitted)is not a very thoughtful well-thought-out decision, and I have to agree with this. In my opinion, regardless its of their importance the* arts should take second place to public services.Nowadays our society have has many problems with the quality of social services and the government should concentrate its efforts on that this. These issues create real problems for people and the government cannot just ignore them. If there are were** more budget allocations of budget on to improving public services it would give have a much more positive effect on the community than building new arts* venues and organizing events.
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