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- Well as the saying goes "practice makes perfect". You could write another notebook entry with what you've just learned from your previous entry. This way you can use the corrected versions of your mistakes in another context. This is where quantity of your written work will improve the quality of your work. For example, if you learned a new grammar point or a new vocabulary, you can use these in your next notebook entry. ;)0 votedApril 24, 20160
Recently, India has achieved positive growth in the IT sector, especially in the software industry. India has very good IT industries. Like you, I am also an IT guy and therefore we face a similar scenario. that Many of my friends and colleagues are trying to be wealthy by having their own IT-linked startups. However, if there's anything I should mention in terms of progress happening in the country then I should say that progress is occurring in many sectors including food, pharmaceuticals, and many more.
0 votedApril 24, 20160Besides a glorious past and very rich culture, India has endured an extremely bad part in its history, too. India was invaded by the Mughals as well as the British for more than 200 years. Unfortunately, the impact of India's colonial past is still felt today. Despite the efforts and sacrifices made by our great freedom fighters, the people of India are still influenced by the negativity imposed by the invaders. As a result, there is a major difference of opinions on many things related to India and this has become an obstacle for growth. So Unlike China, India is still struggling to become a great sovereign nation with the help of many good people who are putting all their full efforts to help their needy brothers and sisters. Honestly, I feel that we have many things to learn from the great nations like China.
Comments: Nicely done. I wrote some alternative words and sentences to described what you want to say. I hope these expressions will help you in your future writings.0 votedApril 24, 20160About my country, India
India is one of the oldest countries in the world. Historically, our country has had its share of good and bad rulers, technological discoveries and religions. India's origins begin with the Aryans and therefore ancient India was called "Aryawart". Since the beginning, India has welcomed millions of people from every corner of the world. As a result, the country has a very rich and diverse culture. In fact, you will discover that for every 100 kilometers you travel in India, there is a different culture and language. This clearly illustrates that India is very rich in its culture and heritage. If you are interested in history, art and culture, India has an endless ocean of knowledge to explore and a superior level of art that exists in every corner of the country and that you will fall in love with. You will enjoy the various folk dances and festivals all over the country.0 votedApril 24, 20160My Life
During my graduation, I thought I would be very successful in my career based on according to my hard work, punctuality and honesty. After completing my graduating with high scores, very qualified result my family and friend were expecting that I would get a job. I was expecting the same from me as well i expected.
Days became harder to more and harder since when everyone had a involve in job except me. I started to feel embarrassed shy to contact the with my all nearest people near me and that made me feel all alone.
Some people claim that they don't have not any goal in of life. Which is coded that This means that they did not find any reason to live.
My goal was simple; to make lead a happy life family with my parents and my soul mate, to take care of my parents and to hold my soul mate's hand forever.
Now I am a burden to my family and (she choose her own life --> meaning your soul? please explain) ignoring all dreams and memory.
My life is not tolerable to me anymore. Every day seems like the last day of my life.0 votedMarch 6, 20160- "Consent" means to give permission or to approve. For example, "I consented to the surgery." "Agree" means to be in unison or concord in a statement or an opinion. For example. "The panel of doctors agreed that the surgery should be performed." Full example with both "consent" and "agree": "The panel of doctors had a meeting. They came to a conclusion and agreed that the surgery should be performed. They explained the procedure in detail to me and listed the pros and cons. The following week I consented to having the surgery done."0 votedFebruary 19, 20161
Correction Part 2
Although the government of a related country could be performing its duties, there are politicians and members of the government body who are more corrupt and selfish. These people think about their family and relatives first before serving their country and engage in corruption such as storing as much black money as they can. Some politicians raise cast-related issues and divide the people of the country into many categories. In this era, recognizing a worthy person any one is very difficult tough work and even more so a politician. Please correct me by using yellow highlighter.
Comments: Very interesting note. Do you think the media is also corrupted and has a way of twisting the facts and dividing the people? I enjoyed reading your text and I agree with many of the points you raised. Good job!
0 votedFebruary 19, 20161Correction Part 1
UNEMPLOYMENT
Earlier, I used to think that my country was facing much problems providing jobs to youngsters. However, ever since I started talking on skype with people from different countries, I realized that not only mine but other countries were also facing this problem. I think the condition of unemployment is increasing day by day but on the other hand, people are becoming more and more selfish and greedy. No one says that he is content with their salary, or job position of job or their social status. In my opinion, the next 50 years will be so terrible. While there are people are getting richer and richer, there are those who and some people are still struggling to earn a living.0 votedFebruary 19, 20161MY OWN OPINION
As an Italian, I will be very disappointed if the bill doesn't get approved, although I'm not gay.
I don't really understand the reason behind protesting to deny a right. Usually, it's the exact opposite.Comments: I enjoyed reading and correcting your note. People find all kinds of reasons to protest nowadays. Many people get offended very easily and unfortunately, many just don't want to give others the right to live. Your English is quite good. Keep it up! :D
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