About my country India
India is one of the oldest country of the world. Our country has a great past of good and bad rulers, technologies and religions. India's origin begins with Aryans and therefore the name of the ancient India was "Aryawart". Since the origin of India, there are millions of people welcomed, almost from every corner of the world. So the country has very rich and diverse in it's culture, most interesting fact that you will discover about India is : Every 100 kilometers you travel , you will a find different culture and different language. That clearly illustrates that India is very rich in its culture and heritage. If you are interested in history, art and culture, India has an endless ocean of knowledge to explore, an ultimate level of art that exists in every corner of the country, you will fall in love with. You will enjoy the different kind of folk dances and festivals, all around the country.
Besides the beautiful past and very rich culture, we have extremely bad part of history too. India was invaded by Mugals and British people for more than 200 years. Unfortunately impact is not over yet. Despite of great history of wars made by our freedom fighters, we are still in a stage where negativity imposed by invaders is holding a great difference of opinions in most of the things, becoming the obstacle for growth. So unlike China we are still struggling to become a great sovereign nation, with the help of many good people, putting their full effort to help their needy brothers and sisters. Honestly I feel, we have to learn to many things from the great nations like China.
Recently, we have achieved good growth in IT sector, especially software industry and we have very good IT industries. Like you I am also an IT guy and therefore I am able to find similar situation, that many of my friends and colleagues trying to create wealth by trying to have their own startups linked with IT itself. However if I have to say about the progress going on in country, then i must say it is going on in many sectors including Food, Pharmaceuticals etc.
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About my country India
India is one of the oldest country of in the world. Our country has had a great past of good and bad rulers, technologies and religions. India's origin beginsbegan with the Aryans and therefore which then became the name of the ancient India was "Aryawart". Since the origin beginning of India, there are millions of people have been welcomed, almost from every corner of the world. So the The country has a very rich and diverse in it's culture and the most interesting fact that you will discover about India is - Every 100 kilometers you travel, you will a find different culture and with a different language. ThatThis clearly illustrates that India is very rich in its culture and heritage. If you are interested in history, art andor culture, India has an endless ocean of knowledge to explore, an ultimate level of art that exists in every corner of the country with which you will fall in love with. You will enjoy the different kind of folk dances and festivals, all around the country.1
Recently, we have achieved good growth in within the IT sector, especially in the software industry and we also have very good IT industries companies. Like you I am also an IT guy and therefore I am able to find myself in similar situations, that many of my friends and colleagues are trying to create wealth earn money by trying to have their own start-ups linked with IT itself. However if I have to say something about the progress going on in the country, then it must say be about what it is going on in many sectors including Food, Pharmaceuticals etc.
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Besides the beautiful past and very rich culture, we also have an extremely bad part of history too. India was invaded by Mugals and British people for more than 200 years. Unfortunately the impact is not over yet. Despite of the great immense history of wars made by our freedom fighters, we are still in a stage where negativity imposed by invaders is holding a great difference of opinions in most of the things, becoming the obstacle for growth. So unlike China we are still struggling to become a great sovereign nation, with the help of many good people, putting their full effort to help their needy brothers and sisters. Honestly I feel, we have to learn to many things a lot from the great nations like China.
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Recently, India has achieved positive growth in the IT sector, especially in the software industry. India has very good IT industries. Like you, I am also an IT guy and therefore we face a similar scenario. that Many of my friends and colleagues are trying to be wealthy by having their own IT-linked startups. However, if there's anything I should mention in terms of progress happening in the country then I should say that progress is occurring in many sectors including food, pharmaceuticals, and many more.
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Besides a glorious past and very rich culture, India has endured an extremely bad part in its history, too. India was invaded by the Mughals as well as the British for more than 200 years. Unfortunately, the impact of India's colonial past is still felt today. Despite the efforts and sacrifices made by our great freedom fighters, the people of India are still influenced by the negativity imposed by the invaders. As a result, there is a major difference of opinions on many things related to India and this has become an obstacle for growth. So Unlike China, India is still struggling to become a great sovereign nation with the help of many good people who are putting all their full efforts to help their needy brothers and sisters. Honestly, I feel that we have many things to learn from the great nations like China.
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