My Life
During my graduation I thought, I will be very successful in my carrier according to my hard work, punctuality and honesty. After completing my graduation with very qualified result my family and friend expecting a job from me as well i expected.
Days became harder to more herder when everyone involve in job except me. I start feel shy to contact with my all nearest people that makes me all alone.
Some people claim that they have not any goal of life. Which is coded that means they did not find any reason to live.
My goal was simple, to make happy family with my parents and my soul mate, take care of parents and hold her hand forever.
Now I am burden to my family and she choose her own life ignoring all dreams and memory.
My life is not tolerable to me anymore. Every day seems last day of my life.
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My Life
During my graduation I thought, I will be very successful in my carrier career. According to my hard work, punctuality and honesty. After completing my graduation with very qualified result, my family and friend was expecting a job from me as well i expected. Side note: When you say "I", you always capitalize it.
Days became harder to more herder hard when everyone was involved in job except for me. I started to feel shy to contact with my all all of my nearest people. That makes me all alone.
Some people claim that they do not have not any goal of in life. Which is coded that means they did not find any reason to live.
My goal was simple, to make a happy family with my parents and my soul mate, take care of parents and hold her hand forever.
Now I am burden to my family, and she choose her own life, ignoring all dreams and memory.
My life is not tolerable to me anymore. Every day seems like the last day of my life.
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My Life
During my graduation, I thought I would be very successful in my career based on according to my hard work, punctuality and honesty. After completing my graduating with high scores, very qualified result my family and friend were expecting that I would get a job. I was expecting the same from me as well i expected.Days became harder to more and harder since when everyone had a involve in job except me. I started to feel embarrassed shy to contact the with my all nearest people near me and that made me feel all alone.
Some people claim that they don't have not any goal in of life. Which is coded that This means that they did not find any reason to live.
My goal was simple; to make lead a happy life family with my parents and my soul mate, to take care of my parents and to hold my soul mate's hand forever.
Now I am a burden to my family and (she choose her own life --> meaning your soul? please explain) ignoring all dreams and memory.
My life is not tolerable to me anymore. Every day seems like the last day of my life.
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