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UNEMPLOYEMENT Earlier I was thinking that my country is facing more problem to provide job to youngster but ever since I started talking on skype with people of different country I came to know that not only mine but other countries also facing this problem. I think the condition of unemployment is increasing day by day and on other hand people are being selfish and greedy. No one says that he is content with his salary or position of job or the level of rich that he/she is. According to my thought the coming 50 years will be so terrible. One side some people are getting rich and rich and some people are still facing problem to earn their living and government of related country performing it's work but the politicians or members of government body are more corrupt and selfish they always thing about their family and relatives and want to store as much black money as they can. Some politicians raise cast related issue and divide the people of country by many categories. In this era recognizing any one is very tough work specially if we talk about politicians. Please correct me by using yellow highlighter.

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Although the government of a related country could be performing its duties, there are politicians and members of the government body who are more corrupt and selfish. These people think about their family and relatives first before serving their country and engage in corruption such as storing as much black money as they can. Some politicians raise cast-related issues and divide the people of the country into many categories. In this era, recognizing a worthy person any one is very difficult tough work and even more so a politician. Please correct me by using yellow highlighter.


Comments:  Very interesting note.  Do you think the media is also corrupted and has a way of twisting the facts and dividing the people? I enjoyed reading your text and I agree with many of the points you raised.  Good job!

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Correction Part 1

UNEMPLOYMENT

Earlier, I used to think that my country was facing much problems providing jobs to youngsters. However, ever since I started talking on skype with people from different countries, I realized that not only mine but other countries were also facing this problem. I think the condition of unemployment is increasing day by day but on the other hand, people are becoming more and more selfish and greedy. No one says that he is content with their salary, or job position of job or their social status. In my opinion, the next 50 years will be so terrible. While there are people are getting richer and richer, there are those who and some people are still struggling to earn a living.

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