It is a terrible day.

I went to Pasa yesterday, it is beautiful city, but it’s a terrible day. My friend and I went to a spot (What spot?), but it was closed. We asked people,"What time does it open?", but they didn't know. When Before we ate our lunch at the famous restaurant, there were many people and we had to wait a long time. and The waiter also got our meal wrong, and the food was cold. We were so hungry and, although the food was cold, we ate. How about you? Should be many funny.  <------(I'm not sure what you were trying to say here.)

Capitalize city names. 

I underlined (    ) the corrections I made.

Put spaces in between commas (,) and periods (.). So instead of 'day.My' it will be 'day. My.'

Your overall notebook entry is in the past tense so instead of 'it's closed' you would have to say 'it was closed,' and same thing with don't and didn't, are and were.

First Certificate

Hello,

Last friday I did took the final exam of my English class. I hope I'll pass that exam with good mark. However, my principal issue now is to try don't to not lose my English skills that I've got acquired this year. For this reason, I would like to decide a new objective, such as first certificate. Besides Also, I would like be able to speak fluent English with people in order to talk about my journey with people in English.

Your notebook entry is very well written. In English, you would not say 'I did took,' instead you would just say 'I took.' However, if you did want to put 'did' in your sentence you could say 'I did take the final exam.' For the next sentence, I 'don't' does not fit in. If you have trouble with contractions try to say it as do not instead of don't and ask yourself if it fits in the sentence structure. You can use 'besides' at the start of your fourth sentence, but I like to use 'also' because besides can mean apart from. Try to not repeat words twice in the same sentence, such as 'English,' and that can also help you make clearer, shorter sentences.

If you had to choose to live in an old flat, wich which you could renovate yourself, or a new flat?

If I had to choose to live in flat, I would prefer to live in an old flat because I would decorate it like I wanted. I could have a big kitchen and I could build or expand the rooms. and I would also paint the wall the coulours (colors).


y If I had to choose to have between a holiday house on the coast or in the mountains, I would prefer to have a holiday house on the coast. cos I would like to sunbate (sunbathe) and I love that my skin is would get tan. I could also see the sunset, but I'd prefer have a holiday house in the mountains. In the mountains, especially in winter, so I could get up early, and I could go walking across the countryside,and the other hand I could breathe better.

You are using too many commas. You have to cut your sentences off more otherwise you would have a run on sentence. The parts    are words that you should have added to your sentence, and the words in    are words that are either spelled incorrectly or are not in the English language. The        words are words that I changed to fit into the sentence better. Overall, your entry was easy to understand and well written.

Third year in college

This is the third year of college; actually it is almost the end of my third year. This semester has been really busy. I have a difficult course final program this semester. I became the leader of international volunteer team, and it is a big challenge for me. But However, I think the bad things will come to pass and the good things will come. I will go to Cambodia this summer. In the end of summer, I would want to go to Taichung City, Taiwan for a child summer camp. I plan to travel around Taiwan, and I would like to hitchhike this time. I look forward to the vocation vacation to come!

Try to describe why your course or being the leader of the international volunteer team was difficult. Try not to use but, and, or because at the beginning of the sentence. It is grammatically correct, but it is not widely used.

My Finnish school day!

I woke up at 6 a.m., and I was really tired. I decided to sleep just a little more, and after a hour I jumped up shocked. I was almost late!
So I quickly threw on my clothes and makeup because I didn't want to be late for the school bus! I ran through the forest between me and the bus stop. As I came closer I began to see the school bus waiting there already. I ran even faster, and luckily, I wasn't late!
I (because you are not with anyone else) arrived at the school yard with my friends, and we just talked about everything we going to do on summer holiday. When the bell rang we walked to our classrooms.
The summer holiday is about to start this week, so everyone is a little bit crazy here. We didn't study much anymore, just watched some movies. One movie was Hunger Games! It was awesome!
We had home economics, math, and Finnish. 
The school day ended and everyone ran to the bus stop, we waited there for about 10 minutes before the bus arrived. The whole bus was stuffed up! Ugh, I didn't enjoy it at all...and so I and my friends arrived home :)

Don't forget to capitalize your I's. 

In the beginning of your story, it seems like you use I too much. Try to word your sentences differently and give them some variety instead of I did this or I did that. Same thing with the end of your story, I felt like you used we too much.