If you had to choose to live in an old flat, wich which you could renovate yourself, or a new flat?

If I had to choose to live in flat, I would prefer to live in an old flat because I would decorate it like I wanted. I could have a big kitchen and I could build or expand the rooms. and I would also paint the wall the coulours (colors).


y If I had to choose to have between a holiday house on the coast or in the mountains, I would prefer to have a holiday house on the coast. cos I would like to sunbate (sunbathe) and I love that my skin is would get tan. I could also see the sunset, but I'd prefer have a holiday house in the mountains. In the mountains, especially in winter, so I could get up early, and I could go walking across the countryside,and the other hand I could breathe better.

You are using too many commas. You have to cut your sentences off more otherwise you would have a run on sentence. The parts    are words that you should have added to your sentence, and the words in    are words that are either spelled incorrectly or are not in the English language. The        words are words that I changed to fit into the sentence better. Overall, your entry was easy to understand and well written.