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I'm lovin' it
I am going to tell you about July, 2nd. I think it was a good day!
I woke up at 8:15 am and went to ride a bike in the park. It was really amazing! The sun was shining and I saw beams of sunlight going through the trees. Birds were also singing and it was pretty soothing. This park is like a tiny bit of nature in the town. After riding my bike, I had breakfast and then read a book for 2 hours or so. Later, I watched some videos on YouTube. At 16:00 pm, my friend and I went to draw and ride a bike (again). We both were very tired. When I went home at 6 o'clock, my dad was cooking fish and vegetables outside. It was tasty! After dinner, I was reading a book and putting my brother in bed*, then I had a shower and went to the bed. Because of the terrible thunder and lightning in the night, I couldn't sleep! I closed the window and eventually fell asleep.
I love such restful days.*I think you meant you were reading him a bedtime story to put him to bed? You could say that you were reading him a bedtime story.
Great job! Don't forget your commas and keep practicing :)
0 votedJuly 3, 20171Buying things on the Internet.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
My essay:
Because it is the century of technology, buying goods on the internet is becoming more and more popular these days. Although there are some disadvantages that we have to face, I believe that we are always benefiting from purchasing things online.
The main advantage that we have is its convenience. We can search for a lot of items on their websites without having to leave home. Some sites also provide the tools that help customers find things easily and quickly. For example, when we buy clothes, we are given more choices of colors, sizes, styles and even prices that suits you well. In addition, buying things online saves a lot of time and money. We can get the products delivered to our homes and give them the money at the same time without worrying about the shipping fee. Also, there are a variety of things on sale at all hours, so it is possible for people who want to buy inexpensive things (to find great deals). Moreover, customers are not the only people who benefit from purchasing things online. Businessmen who manufacture and sell products are benefiting from online sales too. They don't have to build or rent a store. They just need to create a website and start selling. On the other hand, customers and sellers are always afraid of losing money because of robbers and hackers on the Internet too.They now tend to spread quickly online. Also, buyers must be very careful about the quality of goods online because sometimes the product is very different from the advertisement.
In conclusion, I think that the advantages of trading online outweigh its disadvantages. To avoid being cheated, we have to be careful and select the credible websites. It all depends on our choices.Great job! Just some awkward phrasing here and there :)
0 votedJuly 1, 20161my lunch
I am feed quite well at lunch today.main course is a Fried pork shoulder seasoned by cumin.it's so yummy.the surface is crisp and fragrant,inside is very juicy and tender.I had a great lunch today. My main course was fried pork shoulder seasoned with cumin. It was so yummy. The surface was crisp and fragrant, and the inside was very juicy and tender.
0 votedJuly 1, 20161Various sentences without link between them
- Yesterday, I was lying around all day so today I have a lot of work to catch up-(rephrasing) I was lying around all day yesterday, so today I have a lot of work to catch up on.
- When I arrived at the living room, I saw a lot of papers lying all over the room- He didn't lift a finger for her, but she succeeded in carving out her career anyway
- His success was unmistakable
- They disregarded the rules and now they regret it
- She leaps at the chance of buying this house.0 votedJuly 1, 20161Now, our planet is in a crisis because of pollution. Believing that the best way to fix things is to sensitize people and (awkward phrasing) raise awareness, I’m engaged with different associations and we work all the time to create different workshops and sensitize campaigns.
But after a while, I figured out that all this work doesn’t have concrete impact on people, and I understood that even if I had the knowledge of Newton, I couldn't change things if I don’t have power. Power comes with your ability to convey the information . So If I expect that my speech will influence on others, I have to be a leader. This is why your application will help to realize a childhood dream of
being a dynamic person. I will bring to the group a good mood and letting them know everything I had learnt in those years
Moreover, I have always dreamt of visiting USA and have always thought that it’s better to see something once than to hear about it a thousand times. This trip will broaden my vision through meeting a variety of people.
If I changed the meaning of anything when I was correcting it, please tell me! Good Job!0 votedDecember 20, 20150Since my youngest age, my mother used to tell me that people who are crazy enough to truth they can change the world that the once who do.
(I'm not sure what you are trying to say...)
Since I was young, my mother used to tell me that the crazy people who tell the truth can change the world once they do.
Taking a course in USA can be a crazy idea for some people,but in the end we only regret the chances we didn’t take, so I decided to take mine.
As an ambitious person I always dreamt of giving something to humanity to leave something behind me I hoped that my actions will inspire others to dream more, to learn more and to become more.
"I had all the time be attracted by environment and its impact on the health I would marry between these two domains and try to find alternatives to our medication in nature."(Again, I'm not sure what you are trying to say here so I'm not sure how to correct it.)
Apparently this is too long, so I'll continue in the next comment
0 votedDecember 20, 20150All you can eat
I had an appointment today with my friend to eat out at Japanese restaurant because we both have been thinking of eating there for a while. We choose an all you can eat and we had gorged our meals within 30 minutes. Then, our stomachs felt a little bit uncomfortable. We ended up with sitting there and just waiting so that we can consume all of the meals that we had ordered. Eating too much makes me feel like vomiting. It's better to eat moderately instead of overly overeating.
Great job! Just a few minor grammatical errors. Be careful to watch out for run-on sentences!
0 votedAugust 18, 20150
