I'm lovin' it
I am going to tell you about July, 2nd. I think it was a good day!
I woke up at 8:15 am and went to ride a bike in the park. It was really amazing! Sun was shining and I saw beams of sunlight going through the trees. Also birds were singing and it was pretty soothing. That park is like a tiny bit of nature in the town. After riding a bike I had breakfast and then I was reading a book for 2 hours or about this. Later I watched some videos on YouTube. At 16:00 pm me and my friend went to draw and ride a bike (again). We both were very tired. When I went home at 6 o'clock my dad was cooking fish and vegetables outside. It was tasty! After dinner I was reading a book and putting my brother off. Then I had a shower and went to the bed. But it was terrible thunder and lightning in the night and I couldn't sleep! I closed the window and eventually fell asleep.
I love such restful days.
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I'm lovin' it
I am going to tell you about July, 2nd. I think it was a good day!I woke up at 8:15 am and went to ride a bike in the park. It was really amazing! The Sun was shining and I saw beams of sunlight going through the trees. Also birds were singing and it was pretty soothing. That park is like a tiny bit of nature in the town. After riding a bike I had breakfast and then I was reading a book for 2 hours or so. Later I watched some videos on YouTube. At 16:00 my friend and I went to draw and ride a bike (again). We both were very tired. When I came home at 6 o'clock my dad was cooking fish and vegetables outside. It was tasty! After dinner I read and put my brother to bed. Then I had a shower and went to bed. But there was terrible thunder and lightning in the night and I couldn't sleep! I closed the window and eventually fell asleep.
I love such restful days.
Very well written!
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I'm lovin' it
I am going to tell you about July, 2nd. I think it was a good day!I woke up at 8:15 am and went to ride a bike in the park. It was really amazing! The sun was shining and I saw beams of sunlight going through the trees. Birds were also singing and it was pretty soothing. This park is like a tiny bit of nature in the town. After riding my bike, I had breakfast and then read a book for 2 hours or so. Later, I watched some videos on YouTube. At 16:00 pm, my friend and I went to draw and ride a bike (again). We both were very tired. When I went home at 6 o'clock, my dad was cooking fish and vegetables outside. It was tasty! After dinner, I was reading a book and putting my brother in bed*, then I had a shower and went to the bed. Because of the terrible thunder and lightning in the night, I couldn't sleep! I closed the window and eventually fell asleep.
I love such restful days.
*I think you meant you were reading him a bedtime story to put him to bed? You could say that you were reading him a bedtime story.
Great job! Don't forget your commas and keep practicing :)
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