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JohnnyLin1984
All you can eat I had an appointment today with my friend to eat out at Japanese restaurant because we both have been thinking of eating there for a while. we choose all you can eat and we had gorged within 30 minutes and then our stomach felt a little bit uncomfortable. It ended up with sitting there and just waiting so that we can consume all of the meal that we had ordered. Eating too much makes me feel like vomiting. It's better to eat moderately instead of overly.

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All you can eat

I had an appointment today with my friend to eat out at Japanese restaurant because we both have been thinking of eating there for a while. We choose an all you can eat and we had gorged our meals within 30 minutes. Then, our stomachs felt a little bit uncomfortable. We ended up with sitting there and just waiting so that we can consume all of the meals that we had ordered. Eating too much makes me feel like vomiting. It's better to eat moderately instead of overly overeating.

 

Great job! Just a few minor grammatical errors. Be careful to watch out for run-on sentences!

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