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swimming places. please correct if there're any mistakes, thank you
Well, speaking of the places on the subject of where people like to swim, I'd like to talk about a beach and an ocean (beaches are always next to oceans!) besides in Xiamen. It’s a nice spot for swimming and playing water games. I went there for on vacation last year. There were a large number of shops nearby selling equipment that can be used while swimming such as goggles and swimming caps. After parking our car, I bought my a (did you buy them there? Or did you bring them with you?) swimsuit and life ring because I can’t swim. Besides, The shops sold local snacks as well and attracted those who preferred to stay at on the beach enjoying/eating snacks. The ocean was boundless, the water was crystal-clear and the waves were so strong that they knocked me backwards again and again. The beach was packed with countless tourists who were good at swimming, and most of them were women and children. I guess the reason why it’s swimming is popular is because swimming it enables women to lose weight and kids can to have fun. Meanwhile Furthermore, it’s a good way to reduce stress and socialize.Some good descriptions here, Catherine. I particularly enjoyed the imagery of the waves. Have a look at prepositions of place. Keep up the good work! Best, Max.
0 votedJune 8, 20170Food and Cooking. Can you correct the mistakes I made in the writing? Thank you very much .
I like seafood very much, because it is healthy and delicious. I also want to try turkey - I have never tried it. I wonder to know how it tastes because every many western families will cook it at Christmas. Actually , I don't like cooking (though I very really enjoy the food).The problem is that there is always so much smoke and oil while when you are cooking, and it will makes you me smell not good.Another thing is, I always can not control the heat setting when I am cooking, so the food is cooked badly. For example, I cooked the noodles with chicken last month.The result is, was that the noodles was were charred while/(but) the chicken was still fresh. So now I always buy the food from restaurants. But I prefer home cooked food.That It is more healthy and clean.
Good job Elaine! :)
0 votedFebruary 25, 20171Bread
I love bread. If I eat too much bread everyday, I will get fat, because I put on weight easily.Today I found this picture. It makes me hungry. There are eight different types of bread in this picture, and each one looks very delicious. I want to try eating all of them. If I had to choose one, I would choose the pink one at the bottom, second from the right.
0 votedFebruary 19, 20171- WG advert Hey everyone, I sent this message to a possible flatmate, and I wanted to know if it makes any sense. Some context (she had a big white dog that looked like a wolf). Thanks in advance! --------------------------------------------------- Hallo Lea, Das Zimmer scheint toll, und deine Hund sieht aus als wie ein 'Dire Wolf' aus G.O.T. Uber mich: Ich komme aus England, jetzt fertig mit meinem Master-Studium, und ich bin gerade nach Berlin gezogen. Seit ich war 19 habe in WG's geleben, deshalb ich weiß es ist wichtig mit ähnlich mitbewohner leben. Ich bin ruhig und sauber, aber ich bin für ein 'purpose WG' suchen nicht (am abends ich will wein und Konversation teilen). Natürlich, Man brauchen auch Raum. Ich bin nach nachhaltig Berlin bleiben, und ich bin nicht hier 'on Urlaub', und so ich bin für Langzeitmiete suchen. So, wenn du bist für eine lustige, sozial, freundlich Mitbewohner suchen, schickst dur mir eine nachricht :). Ich freue von dir zu hören. Macht's gut, MaxNovember 27, 201620
- Hi Alina, here are a couple of different sentences to sound more native: "As is shown in this chart that there are some factors about why college students find it difficult in getting jobs" 1. Here are some factors explaining why college students find it difficult to get jobs, as is shown in this chart. 2. As is shown in this chart, there are a number of factors that explain why college students find it difficult to get jobs.0 votedSeptember 9, 20160
- Deutsch Schreiben Hallo alle zusammen, Ich bin nach Freiburg mit meinen Freunden im September fahren. Ich komme aus England, und naturlich mein Deutsch ist nicht gut. Aber, will ich Deutsch lernen! Es braucht zeit. Ich mussen schnell eine Wohnung finden. Uber mich: Ich bin 23 jahre alt, und ich habe jetzt fertig mein Master-Studium. Ich bin ein Fan von lesen ('Catch 22' ist mein lieblingsbuch), schreibst (ich schreibe geschichten). Ebenfalls, will ich mit freunden treffen und ins kino gehen, und vielleicht trinken in einen Bar. Ich mag neu leuten treffen. Ich spiele Squash und Fußball (Ich will Freiburg SC sehen!). Ich bin respektvoll, sauber, und ruhig. Ich arbeite hart, bin ich ein Englisch lehrer und ein Tutor, und ich will wohltätige Arbeit in Freiburg machen. Ich suche Mitbewohner, die ähnlich sind. Ich denke Freiburg gut wäre, weil finde ich Natur sehr beruhigend. Ein spaziergang ist großartig fur das gehirn :). Ich weiß mein Deutsch ist nicht großartig, aber ich bin ein schnell Lerner. Ich freuen uns von dir zu hören :). Mach's gut, Max (P.S. Ich bin ein cooler Typ.)September 5, 201630
