swimming places. please correct if there're any mistakes, thank you
Well, speaking of the places where people like to swim, I like to talk about a beach and an ocean besides in Xiamen. It’s a nice spot for swimming and playing water games. I went there for vacation last year. There were a large number of shops nearby selling equipment that can be used while swimming such as goggles and swimming caps. After parking our car, I bought my swimsuit and life ring because I can’t swim. Besides, shops sold local snacks as well and attracted those who preferred to stay at the beach enjoying snacks. The ocean was boundless, the water was crystal-clear and the waves were so strong that they knocked me backwards again and again. The beach was packed with countless tourists who were good at swimming, and most of them were women and children, I guess the reason why it’s popular is because swimming enables women to lose weight and kids can have fun. Meanwhile, it’s a good way to reduce stress and socialize.
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swimming places. please correct if there're any mistakes, thank you
Well, speaking of the places where people like to swim, I like to talk about a beach and an ocean besides in Xiamen.> Well, speaking of places where people like to go for a swim, I like to tell you about a beach that is located very close to Xiamen.
It’s a nice spot for swimming and playing water games.
I went there for my vacation last year. There are were a lot of /a large number of /shops nearby the beach selling all sorts of swimming equipment, that can be used while swimming such as goggles and swimming caps. After parking our car, I bought a my swimsuit and an inflatable life ring-- the latter is because I can’t swim.
Besides, shops sold local snacks as well and attracted those who preferred to stay at the beach enjoying snacks.> Besides these shops, there are many other shops selling local snacks, which are quite popular with those who enjoy having a snack when they are relaxing on the beach. >Use the present tense if the fact is as true now as it was then.
> I went to Beijing last year . The place is ............
The ocean was boundless, the water was crystal-clear and the waves were so strong that they knocked me backwards again and again.> The ocean seemed boundless; the water was crystal-clear, and the waves were so strong that they knocked me backwards again and again.
The beach was packed with countless tourists who were good at swimming, and most of them were women and children, I guess the reason why it’s popular is because swimming enables women to lose weight and kids can have fun.
> The beach was packed with countless tourists, many of them were women and children, and I could see that many of them are pretty good swimmers. I guessed they went there because swimming helps the women to lose weight and, as for the children, it is a place to have fun.
Meanwhile, it’s a good way to reduce stress and socialize.> Meanwhile, I was just sitting somewhere relaxing myself, which is a good way to relieve my stress. It is also a good place to socialize with others.
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swimming places. please correct if there're any mistakes, thank you
Well, speaking of the places on the subject of where people like to swim, I'd like to talk about a beach and an ocean (beaches are always next to oceans!) besides in Xiamen. It’s a nice spot for swimming and playing water games. I went there for on vacation last year. There were a large number of shops nearby selling equipment that can be used while swimming such as goggles and swimming caps. After parking our car, I bought my a (did you buy them there? Or did you bring them with you?) swimsuit and life ring because I can’t swim. Besides, The shops sold local snacks as well and attracted those who preferred to stay at on the beach enjoying/eating snacks. The ocean was boundless, the water was crystal-clear and the waves were so strong that they knocked me backwards again and again. The beach was packed with countless tourists who were good at swimming, and most of them were women and children. I guess the reason why it’s swimming is popular is because swimming it enables women to lose weight and kids can to have fun. Meanwhile Furthermore, it’s a good way to reduce stress and socialize.Some good descriptions here, Catherine. I particularly enjoyed the imagery of the waves. Have a look at prepositions of place. Keep up the good work! Best, Max.
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