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Bread I love bread. If I eat too much bread everyday, although I easily gain weight I will get fat soon. Today I found this picture. It makes me hungry. There are eight different types of breads in this picture.Every bread look very delicious. I want to try eating all of them. If I had choose one I would choose pink one in the bottom second from the right.

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Bread

I love bread. If I eat too much bread everyday I easily gain weight and I will soon get fat. Today I found this picture. It makes me hungry. There are eight different types of bread in this picture. Every bread look delicious. I want to try eating all of them. If I could choose one I would choose the pink one in the bottom second from the right. 

Very well written! and good choice!

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Bread

I love bread. If I eat too much bread everyday, although I easily gain weight I will get fat soon. Today I found this picture. It makes me hungry. There are eight different types of breads in this picture.Every bread look very delicious. I want to try eating all of them. If I had choose one I would choose pink one in the bottom second from the right.
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Bread

I love bread. If I eat too much bread everyday, I will get fat, because I put on weight easily.

Today I found this picture. It makes me hungry. There are eight different types of bread in this picture, and each one looks very delicious. I want to try eating all of them. If I had to choose one, I would choose the pink one at the bottom, second from the right.

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Bread

I love bread. However, if I eat too much bread everyday, I will easily gain weight and get fat.

Today, I found this picture which contains eight different types of bread. It makes me hungry because every bread looks very delicious and I want to eat all of them. But if I were to choose one, I would choose the pink bread in the bottom second from the right.

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Every bread looks very delicious. I want to pick up one of them.

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