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- Essay practice Some people may argue that students do not need to study history as a subject in their class. They insist that students should learn more useful subject than history. However, I have a different idea. I think students should be taught history as a subject in class. The reason is as follow; First of all, studying history can be huge effect to student’s view. In other word, that can be said “learning from past.” While studying history, students can be taught how to make and maintain their view. Let’s assume students in world history class. They in world history class may learn about World War 2. During the class, Students could get a meaning from them. For example, they can be taught the racism-which represented by Hitler-and meaningless war are very harmful to common peoples in world country. So, we can expect that students study about why the war is painful to people, why the racism is bad. It would be very helpful because students are a generation instead of us in future. Second, history can encourage a sort of patriot or loyalty for their community to students. A patriot and loyalty, as you know, are very important thing nowadays because they will handle the country. If students study history in a class, they can get 애착 to their country more than before. For instance, In regional history class, students should hear about many heroes in their country. The president John MacDonald in Canada is a person as great as who in Canadian bill.During learning about him in Canadian history class, Many students try to effort to 본받다 his leadership and wisdom which overcame many national crises such as world war. In conclusion, students could choose other subject for their job or score, however, students can learn history to make their view and be taught from past also. I think students need to study history as a subject over their classes.June 1, 201531
- Essay practice for 23th May Today's topic: Students can benefit more from student organizations or club activities than from academic studies. Agree or disagree? Some people may argue that most important thing for student is the good result at their academic studies. However, I have a different idea. I think that students should think their club activities and student organizations primarily than academic studies. the reasons why follow; First of all, club activities for student can help student's mentality and body health. Many students in Canada take their club activities-sports club, sociality, and so on. there are many club activities in secondary schools. For example,there is a student from Korea. As you know, Students in Korea tend to primary academic studies than other things-club activities, student organization, etc. The student has pressured from academic result, however, can't release whose stress. After all, the student got good grades, but, harmed whose mental and physical health at the same time. So, he is healed from the hospital the disease from his stresses. Second, students learn various things from the club activity. In school, students should be taught social and emotional communication skills; considerate each other. However, students don't learn the skills where a environment academic grades are more important than club activities and student organization. It is no wonder that students are learned many useful skills-not academic-in school. For example, I can assumed a student who plays hockey in school sports club. As hockey player in school hockey club, the student can be taught various skills that might not be learned in classes such as teamwork, and sportsmanship.May 24, 201510
- Essay practice for 11th May Today's Topic: Do you agree or disagree with this statement. People in the past ate more healthy food than people these days. [disagree] Some people may argue that people in the past ate more healthy food than people these days. However, I have a different idea. Nowdays, people eat more healthy than people in the past. the reason is follows; We should distinguish that "good" food life and "tough" food life are different. For example, many people choose whole wheat breads for their health currently. On the other hand, people who live in the past wouldn't have choice for bread. In the past, only some rich people could enjoy white bread, and, common people should eat whole wheat bread to prevent starving. they had no distracter. If they denied whole wheat bread, they had two choice; starve or make a revolution to their rules. In addition, also, Many people who concern theirselve's health tend to follow a diet program;Paleo diet. the diet program's core is eating like palaeolithic men and consists of reducing grains extremely, encouraging to eat meats and exhibiting fruits. That would be a good effect for people who live at present because nowadays people tend to eat a lot of carbohydrate food. However, many scientists and nutritionists are worried about some kind of nutritional unbalance. that could bring out dangerous effect to our body. A scientist said: "Humans like carbohydrate food from long time ago, and it is a sort of natural providence. If I give people in the past whole wheat bread or white bread, they should choose white bread." In conclusion, we should reconsider that the fact people in the past ate more healthy food. What is "more healthy" or not? Maybe, it would be a myth of people at present. We live now-days, can eat more healthy than them in our ways.May 12, 201500
돌아가신 우리 엄마께서 말씀을 하신 대로...
어느 눈이 내리는 밤에, 어떤 여행가가 작은 마을을 지나가고 있었을 때 불타는 집에 앉아있는 남자를 봤어요.
그래서 큰 소리로 불렀어요: 아저씨, 당신의 집을 붙고이 불타고 있어요.
- 네, 알아요...
- 그러면 왜 거기서 앉아 있으세요?... 빨리 밖에 나오가세요...- 난 못해요. 왜냐하면 돌아가신 우리 엄마께서 말씀을 하신 대로 추운 날씨에 집 밖에 나가면 감기에 걸릴 것이기 때문이입니다.
1) In Korean, in some case, possesive case of 1st person("나") could be "우리". For example, 우리 엄마, 우리 집. Of course, 우리 means "our" or "we" usally, the cases are common uses:)
2) honorific: 가->께서, 이다->입니다. unify of ending of the word (especially 이다 and 입니다) need to give unity at whole essay.
0 votedMay 8, 20151아기를 기다리다
지금은 난 임신 7 개월.난 너무 행복해요. 빨리 아기 를 가지고 있기 때문에. 내가 안전하게 출산 할 수 있으면 좋겠다 ^ ^
지금 난 임신 7개월. 난 너무 행복해요. 빨리 아기를 가졌기 때문에, 내가 안전하게 출산할 수 있으면 한다.^^
Do you mean "빨리 아기를 가지고 있기 때문에" as "Because I am pregnant at young age" ?^^
I hope you give easy birth! If you have a question, reply me please:)
0 votedMay 8, 20152- Essay practice for 7th May Today's topic: Nowdays, food has become easier to prepare, has this change improve the way people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Some people may argue that food has become easier to prepare nowadays than before, however, this change doesn't help people. However, I have a different idea. In my opinion, food to prepare easily has changed our lives more productive. the reason is as follows; First of all, if food has become easier to prepare, people can earn more money in the hour to prepare food. People spend much time to prepare and cook their food, furthermore, some recipe should takes several hours. For example, let's assume to make a beef stew. we should buy the ingredients, trim them, and boil 2 or more hours. On the other hand, we can buy trimmed vegetables, beef, and any other ingredients at grocery. The latter can save time more than the former, so, we can earn more money in the time we saved. Second, It will be possible to increase food industry employment. As I mentioned earlier, the food industry has increased rapidly and need more employees for making a trimmed food ingredients, running deli, and other food companies or restaurant. In other words, convenient to prepare food means to expand of food industry and employ.May 8, 201520
Avengers: Age of Ultron을 4디멘션으로 봤다
어젯밤에 부모님들하고 남동생하고 The Avengers: Age of Ultron을 4디멘션으로 봤다. 기본 극장처럼 말고 극장에 있는 의자가 뭔가 낼 때마다 자꾸 움직였지만 영화가 너무 좋아~^^ 필리핀으로 다음 여행하면 다시 할께요. 그리고 내가 사고 싶은 책을 아직도 안 사서 도라가 야 됐다. 그 책은 엄마를 부탁해라고 부른다. 그리고 내겐 너무 사랑스러운 그녀라고 했던 한드라마의 타갈로그어 버전을 보고 싶었기 때문에 엄마하고 나하고 집에 빨리 갈 게 좋아서 오래된 시간 후에 드라마를 볼 수 있었습니다.
어젯밤에 부모님과 남동생과 The Avengers: Age of Ultron을 4디멘션으로 봤다. 기본 극장과 다르게 극장에 있는 의자가 뭔가 낼 때마다 자꾸 움직였지만 영화가 너무 좋아~^^ 필리핀으로 다음 여행하면 다시 할께요. 그리고 내가 사고 싶은 책을 그 때까지 안 사서 돌아가야 했다. 그 책은 엄마를 부탁해 이다. 그리고 내겐 너무 사랑스러운 그녀라고 하는 한국드라마의 타갈로그어 버전을 보고 싶었기 때문에 엄마와 나는 집에 빨리 돌아갔습니다. 긴 시간 후에 드라마를 볼 수 있었습니다.
제 날의 스토리를 읽어주어서 감사합니다!! 잘못이 있으면 말해주세요^^0 votedMay 7, 20151- Essay practice of 6th May I'm a student who is learning arts, however, need to develop writing skills more. Therefore, I am going to write an essay everyday for writing practice! Today's topic: A job should mean a job for life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Some people may argue that people should have a job for life, however, I have different idea. In my opinion, people can have several jobs for life. The reason is as in the following; First of all, because of medical development, average span of human age is much more expanded than before. Nevertheless, many companies ask them to retire around 65. Of course, in past, 65 the age was enough to prepare their old age, but, the elders in nowadays can't do that. Unlike in the past, expanding average span of age, senior citizens can live 20 years more. In other word, If they retire at 65 years old, they would live approx.20 years healthy.For example, Laura is a crew of Tim horton's where I favourite, she is 68 years old. When she was young, she taught students french. Although retired, she is still healthy. So she works at Tim Horton's as part time worker and satisfied the second job. Second,many jobs occur and disappear in our society because times are changing. For example, computer programmer is a job appeared recently. 100 years ago, people might ignorance about that job. On the contrary to this, for example, my grandmother was a telephone operator. Telephone operator is a job to accept a call from customer and redirect to other customer. That was famous job, however, while communication technic developing, telephone connected automatically each other was invented. Therefore, many people doesn't need telephone operators anymore. Then, how about the telephone operators who losing jobs? They should find other jobs and adapted the other job soon. In conclusion, People can choose a job for whole life, however, a human age is much expanded than before period and many jobs have changed because of development of technology. Therefore, I think people has several jobs in whole life.May 7, 201510
- Difference basic from fundimental Basic, fundimental, and elimental are interchangeable words, I know, But Id like to when can i use them. For example, Once a teacher demonstrates the _________of drawing, painting, sculpture, and so on What can I put the blank in word? Basic? Fundimental?May 6, 201520
- A question I can't understand on my Cloze test the question sentence is; The brain-cooling theory does not wonder a bigger mystery about yawning, namely, _____________humans yawn when they see someone can do it. and I should fill a blank up. examples are A) show B) reason C) the D) why. I selected (D) why, but, the correct answer is (B). when I studied about relative adverb, my teacher said reason and why can substitute each other. so I confused a little. could somebody explain about that clearly?May 3, 201510
