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Essay practice for 11th May Today's Topic: Do you agree or disagree with this statement. People in the past ate more healthy food than people these days. [disagree] Some people may argue that people in the past ate more healthy food than people these days. However, I have a different idea. Nowdays, people eat more healthy than people in the past. the reason is follows; We should distinguish that "good" food life and "tough" food life are different. For example, many people choose whole wheat breads for their health currently. On the other hand, people who live in the past wouldn't have choice for bread. In the past, only some rich people could enjoy white bread, and, common people should eat whole wheat bread to prevent starving. they had no distracter. If they denied whole wheat bread, they had two choice; starve or make a revolution to their rules. In addition, also, Many people who concern theirselve's health tend to follow a diet program;Paleo diet. the diet program's core is eating like palaeolithic men and consists of reducing grains extremely, encouraging to eat meats and exhibiting fruits. That would be a good effect for people who live at present because nowadays people tend to eat a lot of carbohydrate food. However, many scientists and nutritionists are worried about some kind of nutritional unbalance. that could bring out dangerous effect to our body. A scientist said: "Humans like carbohydrate food from long time ago, and it is a sort of natural providence. If I give people in the past whole wheat bread or white bread, they should choose white bread." In conclusion, we should reconsider that the fact people in the past ate more healthy food. What is "more healthy" or not? Maybe, it would be a myth of people at present. We live now-days, can eat more healthy than them in our ways.

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