My experience

<em>I have gotten experience practice at the in Crowne Plaza during a summer internship? for a summary vacation</em> [were you on vacation or was this work? I'm not completely sure of the meaning]. Based on my experiences, hotel operators now focus more on the quality standards in order to meet the basic needs and expectations of their customers. Good service quality will attracts more customers, and this will leaves people him or her with a good impression. For example, I have seen a customer return come to our hotel several times because he thinks our service is outstanding. It is a nice time staying there, so he loves to come back again and again.

In China, along with rapid economic development, people's living standard also has been significantly enhanced enhances. Thus, the level strand of service has improved. For Chinese, service is the determining factor core sense of the value worth of the hotel, and measurement and evaluation of customers' users’ satisfaction indexes are used for the evaluation on this purpose. Good service quality also will increase customer satisfaction approval with the loyalty and lead to increased brand recognition in China.

In my opinion, first and foremost, service is the foundation groundwork of a hotel, with people as the backbone foundation of service. So, enhancing the training to improve the capability and skills of staff can improve the service quality. Second, providing a variety of services is are an important aspect point of to improving service quality. Customer have will get different services requirements, for example, some customers may have a strange hobby. Nevertheless, the hotel needs to meet the needs of the people. Third, if a hotel has a good prestige, it means the hotel has a good service quality. These two factors are influencing each other continuously. Fourth, provide a good facility and environment, and customers will have a better experience in the hotel. For example, the in Crowne Plaza, hotel has with five different sizes of multipurpose conference rooms, and is also equipped with international first- class conference facilities, to meet the different needs of the customers.

Generally, very good. I was confused with the very first sentence since you said vacation. I think you meant internship. The last paragraph also needs improvement, but moreso for content versus grammar. I think your points had many similarities, so no need for some, and it just didn't make as much sense. But I couldn't correct that without much more substantial corrections.

普通的是，不错！我在先句子很迷茫因为词：”vacation“。我觉得你想写实习还是工作（internship／job）。最后paragraph（不知道如何说用中文）也需要提高了，但是与其提高内容不如语法。我觉得大部分你的观点像差不多一样，所以不用一些，还有比较迷茫。可是，不能改正，如果没有更多大修正。

再说，我看你的写作非常好????。你可以看我也需要改进好多拉！:-)

My confusion

When I listen the to english I feel fell a passion burning in my heart that my heat is so hot and I want to really sing it, especially the rock music. And Science fiction is my favorite kind of movie is my favorite. I really deeply know that learning english won't stop. So You must keep your hot heat burning passion to learning the language in your life, looks like you have to eat meat., and you try your best to spend more time to study everything you touch [or come across].

Teaching

I recently started teaching English part time, although I am not a native speaker of English. I thought this would be easy, because I was confident about my English skills. I only need to teach English phonetics <em>for the time being</em> (for a short while / temporarily).

However, when I faced a group of students, things were a bit different. Different students <em>were endowed with</em> (had) different learning abilities and they were in different learning phases of learning too. So, it became a bit difficult to reach a balance in my teaching pace since the lower- or higher-bound students could each both complain.

The second thing is the problem of was my own attitude. At first, I treated <em>it</em> (teaching) simply as a part-time job to make money, but (and) not as a serious undertaking. So Each time I finished a lesson, I instantly quickly ran out of the classroom. Later my supervisor told me that it wouldn't didn't work with the students because they were expecting more conversation with the teacher.[sentence is a bit long]  and tThe teacher is be responsible for giving feedback and keeping track of all their students too. I was enlightened [surprised, or embarrassed, or simply "understood] and felt guilty. I began to treat it more seriously.

However sStill, though, three students wanted to withdraw from the lessons because they said they couldn't follow my teaching pace [or speed, style, etc]. I felt very disappointed as it was a disapproval of my ability. The supervisor <em>comforted me</em> [made me feel better by saying] that the students themselves had completed all the levels, so maybe they were better suited for lessons given by a slower-paced teacher. In the end, I do know that there is something that I could do, and I didn't.

Finally, another thing is my personality. I am rather quiet and <em>mild</em> [I would choose a different word - mild isn't used in this context usually], while teaching requires an active and energetic personality.

There are is still a lot to learn and a lot to of progress to be made.

Thank you for any corrections!

[挺好的！你写了英文非常好！只有一点点问题。还有，对不起，我的corrections不一样。有的时候cross out, 有的时候make comments。不管，很棒的写啦！Sorry for the inconsistency in corrections! Sometimes I crossed things out, sometimes not, etc. - Bruce]