说说一件糟糕

I have to write about an unfortunate event I experienced and present it in class tomorrow. If anyone can help me correct my sentences it'd be much appreciated. My grammar is horrible, and I don't know how to translate some of what I want to say into Mandarin. So please take a look at both the English and Mandarin version.

Here's what I am saying:

Let me quickly tell you about an unfortunate matter. During this past summer, me and a friend were driving up to visit Tennessee.During the drive, my friend became very tired because he had been the main person driving this whole time. During the middle of the trip, we decided to switch seats, therefore I could drive while he rests. So I'm driving...and suddenly! I saw a police vehicle following behind me, and I forgot to bring my driver's license with me on the trip. I was in a slight state of panic.You can guess what happened next. This turned out to be a horrible summer vacation.

我说说一下我的一件糟糕糗事儿！在过去的这个夏天我跟一个朋友，我们开车去田纳西玩儿。路途中开车的长期时候，我的朋友变得太非常疲惫，因为他是了主要由他驾驶。中间的时候旅游，半路上，我们换了座位，我来开车，他休息所以一边我开车一边他能睡觉了。所以我在我开车的时候…忽然！我看到一辆警车在我身后！和我忘了带我的驾驶执照，我有点紧张，你能猜到接下来发生了什么。这是一个糟糕的暑假了。

商代和甲骨文。怎么做考古学呢？

李学勤在《走出疑古时代》一书中提到：“甲骨文所能表现的东西是有限的，不能认为甲骨文没有的东西商朝就不能有。”我同意李学勤的意见。商代时，甲骨文的使用范围比较窄，所以它们反应不出商代文化的很多方面，尤其是凡夫俗子普通百姓的生活方式。所以我们能推断，甲骨文没有的东西商朝也可能有。我觉得甲骨文有一点像探照灯-它们对准的地方很亮而且我们可以看得比较清楚，但是他们不对准没有照亮的面积更大的地方还是完全黑暗，而且我们必须通过其他方法来探索这些黑暗的地方。

史学家不应该只用甲骨文来分析商代的历史，一个更好的方法便是把甲骨文跟其他考古学的发现结合起来，做一个更完整的分析。其他它考古学文物能弥补甲骨文未记载的信息。

但是就算我们不应该单独用甲骨文来分析商代历史，这不意味着甲骨文没有考古学价值。其实我们还应该把甲骨文视为商代最重要的考古学发现之一。甲骨文的重要性来源于它们是最好保存到现在的古老文字。甚至在商代甲骨文已经是很成熟和比较发达的文字，中国文字通过几千年的发展。，除了一些形式和写法的变更以外，甲骨文跟现代的中国文字大同小异。这表明很久以前中国古代文化已经挺很发达。所以我们不应该低估甲骨文对中国文化的重要性。

甲骨文的缺点是如上所述的：甲骨文都有很固定的形式，而且仅限于几种主要的题材。这些题材包括族谱，天文学，气象学和宗教。对于这些题材，甲骨文是独一无二的史料。譬如说，对天文学而言，甲骨文有世界最早日食目击和彗星目击的记载。

总的来说，谁也不能否定李学勤的看法。虽然甲骨文是很重要的古老文物，但是它们明明不记载商代文化的每一个方面。但是对它们所记载的东西，甲骨文是非常宝贵的史料。甲骨文所记载的东西能告诉我们商代有的东西，但是对甲骨文没有的东西而言，商代还可能有。

今天写的句子（第七课）

In these sentences I used a lot of adj.reduplication just to simply practise it, so don't be discouraged! :)
句子unit 7
1.在波兰冬天的时候天气很冷我不说 舒服，再说我也很容易生病。-Winters in Poland are so cold I'm not feeling good, furthermore I am also prone to being sick.
2.看来你不太舒服，你的眼睛红红的，脸青青的，你生了什么病了吗？-It looks like you are not feeling your best, your eyes are red, face is green, what sickness have you cought?
3.苹果，香蕉和酸奶是一个很好吃的早饭。- Apples and bananas with yoghurt are the best tasting breakfast.
4.那个小孩子不喜欢吃柠檬，这个水果酸酸的，他宁吃甜的。-This little child doesn't like to eat lemons, because they are very sour and he preferes sweet.
5.他说他跟我们去法国旅行，结果他没去。-He said he will definitely go travelling with us, as a result he didn't go ( we were very dissapointed he didn't).
6.请你这个白包放在我的椅子上。我一回来就知道应该在哪找到它这个东西。-Could you please put this white,round bag on my chair? As soon as I get back home I will know where to look for it.
7.我昨天下课以后走路回家，因为公共汽车塞满人，我不可能上去了。-Yesterday after finishing classes I came home on foot, because bus was packed with people and I couldn't go in.
8.你看我的表，十二点了，太晚了,我们该去了。-Look at my watch, it is already 12 pm, so late! We should be going out now.
9。你就认识她了！你还是不记得，这就是这个高高的，胖胖的，黄黄头发的，旧旧的一个太太。                      你一定见过她！怎么来的，你不记得了，这就是那个又高又胖，金发碧眼的老太太。You must have met her! How come you don't remember, this is the tall, fat , blonde-haired, old lady.
10。我同学的女朋友长得矮矮的，瘦瘦的，皮肤好好的，她穿着一件黑外套，戴的一副墨镜，真很可可爱爱的。-My classmate's girlfriend is small,thin, has a nice skin, wears black jacket and a pair of sunglasses, so lovely.
11.两个钟头以后很有名的大熊猫终于出来了。-After two hours panda finally came out.
12.我听说中国西南地区的风景很壮观，再说那个地方的竹子森林里的熊猫是世界上数量最多的。- I heard that the landscape of Southwest part of China is magnificent, furthermore this place's bamboo forests have the biggest amount of Great Pandas in the entire world.