说说一件糟糕的事

I have to write about an unfortunate event I experienced and present it in class tomorrow. If anyone can help me correct my sentences it'd be much appreciated. My grammar is horrible, and I don't know how to translate some of what I want to say into Mandarin. So please take a look at both the English and Mandarin version.

Here's what I am saying:

Let me quickly tell you about an unfortunate matter. During this past summer, me and a friend were driving up to visit Tennessee.During the drive, my friend became very tired because he had been the main person driving this whole time. During the middle of the trip, we decided to switch seats, therefore I could drive while he rests. So I'm driving...and suddenly! I saw a police vehicle following behind me, and I forgot to bring my driver's license with me on the trip. I was in a slight state of panic.You can guess what happened next. This turned out to be a horrible summer vacation.

我说说我的一件糟糕事儿！去年夏天我跟一个朋友开车去田纳西一儿。路上，开车的时间很长，我的朋友变得很疲惫，因为他是主要司机。中间休息的时候，我们换了座位，我来开车，他能睡觉了。我在开车……忽然！我看到一辆警车在我身后，但我忘了我的驾驶执照……你能猜到接下来发生了什么……这是一个糟糕暑假!

说说糟糕的一件事

说说我糟糕的一件事儿！刚刚过去的这个夏天我跟一个朋友开车去田纳西玩儿。由于长时间开车，我的朋友显得很疲惫，因为主要是由他驾驶。中途休息的时候，我们换了座位，所以在我开车的时候他可以睡觉。忽然！我看到一辆警车在我身后，关键是我忘了带驾驶执照。接下来你能猜到都发生什么事了吧。这实在是一个糟糕的暑假！

说说一件糟糕

I have to write about an unfortunate event I experienced and present it in class tomorrow. If anyone can help me correct my sentences it'd be much appreciated. My grammar is horrible, and I don't know how to translate some of what I want to say into Mandarin. So please take a look at both the English and Mandarin version.

Here's what I am saying:

Let me quickly tell you about an unfortunate matter. During this past summer, me and a friend were driving up to visit Tennessee.During the drive, my friend became very tired because he had been the main person driving this whole time. During the middle of the trip, we decided to switch seats, therefore I could drive while he rests. So I'm driving...and suddenly! I saw a police vehicle following behind me, and I forgot to bring my driver's license with me on the trip. I was in a slight state of panic.You can guess what happened next. This turned out to be a horrible summer vacation.

我说说一下我的一件糟糕糗事儿！在过去的这个夏天我跟一个朋友，我们开车去田纳西玩儿。路途中开车的长期时候，我的朋友变得太非常疲惫，因为他是了主要由他驾驶。中间的时候旅游，半路上，我们换了座位，我来开车，他休息所以一边我开车一边他能睡觉了。所以我在我开车的时候…忽然！我看到一辆警车在我身后！和我忘了带我的驾驶执照，我有点紧张，你能猜到接下来发生了什么。这是一个糟糕的暑假了。

说说一件糟糕

I have to write about an unfortunate event I experienced and present it in class tomorrow. If anyone can help me correct my sentences it'd be much appreciated. My grammar is horrible, and I don't know how to translate some of what I want to say into Mandarin. So please take a look at both the English and Mandarin version.

Here's what I am saying:

Let me quickly tell you about an unfortunate matter. During this past summer, me and a friend were driving up to visit Tennessee.During the drive, my friend became very tired because he had been the main person driving this whole time. During the middle of the trip, we decided to switch seats, therefore, I could drive while he was rests resting. So I'm was driving...and suddenly! I saw a police vehicle following behind me, and I forgot to bring my driver's license with me on the trip. I was in a slight state of panic.You can guess what happened next. This turned out to be a horrible summer vacation.

我说说一下我的一件糟糕事儿！过去的这个夏天跟我一个朋友，我们开车去田纳西玩儿。由于长时间的开车长期时候，我的朋友变得太疲惫，因为他是了主要的开车人。中间的时候旅游，我们换了座位由我来开，所以当我开车的时候，他能乘机休息一会。所以然而，当我在开车的时候…忽然！我看到一辆警车在我身后，和我忘带了我的驾驶执照。你能猜到接下来发生了什么。这是一个糟糕的暑假了。PS不过幸运的是，在美国，即使我忘记带驾驶证了，我可以告诉我的ID号给警察。让他去核实我的身份，哈哈哈。。。

说说一件糟糕

I have to write about an unfortunate event I experienced and present it in class tomorrow. If anyone can help me correct my sentences it'd be much appreciated. My grammar is horrible, and I don't know how to translate some of what I want to say into Mandarin. So please take a look at both the English and Mandarin version.

Here's what I am saying:

Let me quickly tell you about an unfortunate matter. During this past summer, me and a friend were driving up to visit Tennessee.During the drive, my friend became very tired because he had been the main person driving this whole time. During the middle of the trip, we decided to switch seats, therefore I could drive while he rests. So I'm driving...and suddenly! I saw a police vehicle following behind me, and I forgot to bring my driver's license with me on the trip. I was in a slight state of panic.You can guess what happened next. This turned out to be a horrible summer vacation.

我说说一下我的一件糟糕事儿！过去的这个夏天跟我一个朋友，我们开车去田纳西玩儿。开车的长期时候，我的朋友变得太疲惫，因为他是了主要的开车人。中间的时候旅游，我们换了座位，所以一边我开车一边他能睡觉了。所以我在开车…忽然！我看到一辆警车在我身后，和我忘了我的驾驶执照。你能猜到接下来发生了什么。这是一个糟糕的暑假了。

我（来）说说一下我的一件糟糕事儿！过去的这个夏天跟我一个朋友，我们开车去田纳西玩儿。开车的长期时候（路途中），我的朋友变得太（很）疲惫，因为他是了主要的开车人（主驾）。中间的时候旅游（中途），我们换了座位，所以一边我开车（时）一边他（就)能睡觉了。所以我在开车…忽然！我看到一辆警车在我身后，和我忘了（带）我的驾驶执照。你能猜到接下来发生了什么（吧）……这是一个糟糕的暑假了。