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Hey, my name is Linda and I guess I'm a quite normal sixteen year old austrian student. I love my friends, my family, John Green Book's, Pizza and "Kärntnernudeln". I attend a secundary technical college (department of biomedicine and health technologie) and am part of red cross organisation in our town. I also love shopping and watching the latest episodes of "Criminal Minds" and "Greys Anatomy".
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    2016. 01.06 Mittwoch

    Ich bin spät aufgestanden. Und ich habe Kopfschmerzen.
    <em>(Ich bin war (Vergangenheit) mich mit meine Freundin bewegen</em>.) Ich bin mit meiner Freundin Sport machen (?). Je kälter das Wetter ist, um so (mehr) weniger kann ich (nicht) das Bett verlassen. <em>(mehr+negation = weniger)</em>
    Nach <em>der Bewegung</em> (dem Sport) haben wir spät Abend gegessen. Und wir haben Kaffee getrunken. Meine Freundin hat 'cold velvet vanila cappuccino' getrunken . Das Kaffee ist neu auf der Speisekarte/ auf dem Menu in Starbucks. Aber es war schlecht.. (Selbst) und es ist ziemlich teuer X(.

     

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    Rot - Grammatikfehler (Grammar mistake)
    Grün - Rechtschreibfehler (Spelling mistake)
    Blau - Ausdruck (Expression mistake eg. wrong word, wrong word order, wrong phrase...)
    a) Hellblau - eigentlich richtig, klingt aber anders besser (actually true, but sounds better other way)
    b) Dunkelblau - falsch

     

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    How to say 'so' in German? I'm confused to use also/deshalb/und

     

    also (so, therefore), deshalb (so, because of that, therefore) and und (and) are conjunctions. There used to connect two or more sentences. Read more at the following link:

     

    http://www.languageexcellence.net/wordpress/2011/05/17/german-grammar-conjunctions/

     

    Beispiele:


    Sabine hat Schnupfen. Sie kauft sich viele Taschentücher.

    Sabine hat Schnupfen, also kauft sie sich viele Taschentücher. 

    <em>She catched a cold and AS RESULT/SO/THEREFORE she buys many handkerchiefs.</em>

    Sabine hat Schnupfen, desshalb kauft sie sich viele Taschentücher.

    <em>Same. She catched a cold, and AS RESULT/SO/THEREFORE she buys many handkerchiefs.</em>

     

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    January 6, 2016
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    Holiday in Massachusetts Dear Jamie Oliver, Hello im spending a two-week holiday in Massachusetts with my family. I have been staying there for three days now. Right now are we in the Fenway Stadium. It's a big stadium, where teams plalying baseball. After the Baseball match we will eat in the stadium restaurant. It will be a nice day. the last three days we did a long sightseeing tour. That were also a good idea. We aren't make any plans for the next days, but i hope we won't get in danger. See you soon! Your Carlos
    January 6, 2016
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    Messie - Syndrom

    Liebe Anie,
    Heute (lese) las ich viele Informationen (von) in einer Reportage (Heute erhielt ich viele Informationen aus einer Reportage) und sofort (denke) dachte ich an dich. Letzten Monat besuchte ich (dir) dich zu Hause und ich konnte mir nicht vorstellen, dass dein Raum total chaotisch mit sehr vielen Gegenständen war. Unglaublicherweiße fühltest du dich normal und du wolltest alles nicht in Ordnung (nicht) halten. Als Ich habe gelesen (habe), dass du Problem mit dem Messie - Syndrom haben (kannst) könntest. Laut der Reportage sind Berufstätige, bei denen es häufig Veränderungen im Arbeitsleben gibt, besonders anfällig für das Messietum. Außerdem isolieren Messies sich oft (sich), um ihre Krankheit zu verbergen. So sollst (du) dir Hilfe bei einem Experte suchen, damit er dir deutlicher über dein Problem erklären kann. Nachdem Treffen erwarte ich mich (sehr auf deine Folge) Besserung. <em>Ich hoffe bald, dich wiederzusehen.</em> Ich hoffe, dich bald wiederzusehen.
    Viele Grüße
    Hung

     

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    Rot - Grammatikfehler (Grammar mistake)
    Grün - Rechtschreibfehler (Spelling mistake)
    Blau - Ausdruck (Expression mistake eg. wrong word, wrong word order, wrong phrase...)
               Hellblau - eigentlich richtig, klingt aber anders besser (actually true, but sounds better other              way)
               Dunkelblau - flalsch

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    War schon ganz gut, aber ein paar Fehler in Ausdruck und Grammatik habe ich gefunden, was aber nicht schlimm ist. Man versteht was du sagen willst und viele Sätze sind richtig. Weiter so :)

     

    Wenn du Fragen hast, frag ruhig ;)

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    January 6, 2016
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    Eine Email schreiben

    Lieber Christian, am Samstag war meiner 26. Geburtstag. Alle meine Freunde (von mir) und ich haben gefeiert.
    Stell dir vor, das Wetter war schoen und warm und wir konnten (wir) die ganze Zeit am Strand gefeiern und spielen. Erinnertst du dich an Chess? Sie hat koestlichen Kuchen gemacht und mir ein Geschenk gegeben, das fand ich am besten: Eine Puppe hat sie fuer mich gemacht!
    Ich vermisse dich sehr! Wirst du im Sommer nach Taiwan fliegen? Wir koennten zusammen auf den Nachtmarkt gehen und koestliches Essen probieren.
    Melde dich.

    Liebe Gruesse

    SHaron

     

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    Rot - Grammatikfehler (Grammar mistake)

    Grün - Rechtschreibfehler (Spelling mistake)

    Blau - Ausdruck (Expression mistake eg. wrong word, wrong word order, wrong phrase...)

              Hellblau - eigentlich richtig, klingt aber anders besser (actually true, but sounds better other                              way)

              Dunkelblau - flalsch

     

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    January 6, 2016
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    The Bosten Tea Party In the 1700s, Bosten was a very important port of america. Bosten was a part of the British colony and they had to pay taxes to Britan. In the 1770, british soldiers killed a few american pieceful humen. The amarican population were angry and in the night of the 16 of December 1773,in the Bosten harbour amarican people, who were dressed like indians threw 300 boxes of in the ocean infront of the population. They cheered when the tea went into the sea. 1775 Bosten became independent.
    January 6, 2016
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    My favourite sports and leisure activities I’m not a sporty person, totally not, but I do some sport to keep myself fit. Twice a week I try to go jogging for about half an hour and sometimes I do some workouts, but I don’t enjoy this that much. I’m rather this kind of person, who’s lying on the couch with a big bag of crisps, watching the latest episode ‘criminal minds’. In the summer, I love to go swimming in our local public swimming pool. When we’re on holiday in Croatia this year, maybe I’ll attend a scuba diving course, because I love diving. In my leisure time I also love meeting my friends and spend time with my pets. And I love to write weird story’s which don’t make any sense… And of course I love shopping, like any other girl. :P
    May 11, 2015
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    Kurze Vorstellung

    Hallo!
    Mein Name ist Riccardo, ich bin hier um meinen Deutsch zu verbessern.
    Ich weiss, dass ich viele Fehlern mache. Bitte hilf mir mich mit meinem [sounds better] Deutsch und ich wird werde ihnen [formal; informal: dir] mit Italienisch helfen.
    Tschuss, [ü=ue]
    -Riccardo

     

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    May 10, 2015
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    My favourite sports and leisure activitys I’m not a sporty person, totally not, but I do some sport to keep myself fit. Twice a week I try to go jogging for about half an hour and sometimes I do some workouts, but I don’t enjoy this that much. I’m rather this kind of person, who’s lying on the couch with a big bag of crisps, watching the latest episode ‘criminal minds’. In the summer, I love to go swimming in our local public swimming pool. When we’re on holiday in Croatia this year, maybe I’ll attend a scuba diving course, because I love diving. In my leisure time I also love meeting my friends and spend time with my pets. And I love to write weird story’s which don’t make any sense… And of course I love shopping, like any other girl. :P
    May 10, 2015
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    Legalize Performance-Enhancing Drugs? Performance enhancing drugs are substances used to improve any form of activity performance in humans. The risks of so-called 'doping' are enormous. Sportspeople who use performance-enhancing drugs often suffer from heart and liver deseases and are more likely to have a heart attack, a stroke or cancer. Many of them die of exhaustion in the end of a competition. But why should we legalize PED’s? Sportspeople will always take drugs, there’s not a really chance to prevent doping. You can only try to make it safer, by legalizing PED’s. Experts could make sure, sportspeople aren’t taking dirty drugs, which jeopardize their health. Some people are worried, because only rich people will have enough money to buy PED’s, but rich sportspeople will always have an advantage.
    May 10, 2015
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    My life online When I think about my life online, the first think witch comes to my mind is facebook. Without doubt, facebook is one of the most popular social networks. The main reason why I use facebook is the number of user. Nearly everyone uses facebook. I use it to keep in touch with friends of mine, whom I can’t talk to or who are too far away to just drop by. Facebook is also handy to send messages and share pictures or to just get to know what happens around the world. Another useful social network is skype. With skype you can do voice calls and write messages. You also can do that with facebook, but the quality of skype is much better and you don’t have to share so much personal details with people you probably don’t know. I mainly use skype to talk to “friends” from foreign countrys who I don’t know personally. There also many other social media I use e.g. Instagram, to share pictures of my everyday life, youtube, to watch video clips, or whatsapp, to send free massages to my friends.
    May 9, 2015
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