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Hello, my name is Hallam... I have a broad range of interests such as music, film, art, literature and philosophy; as well as learning of other cultures and finding common ground among people from across the globe. Estoy aprendiendo español, puedo ayudar a su inglés. 大家好 我叫 Hal。 我要學中文。 我可以帮助你學說英語。
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    Some people think that reading for pleasure is more useful in developing children’s language skills and imagination than watching TV and surfing the Internet. I partly agree with this opinion. 


    I agree that leisure reading is beneficial to the development of children’s imagination. Some fiction works (maybe better: fictional works/works of fiction) such as novels, fairy tales and fables are pretty different from the children’s daily life, so they need to imagine the setting within the books when they read it. Even some non-fiction works like biographies and history books also need children to use their imagination because these kinds of books talk about some real things that happened in a successful person's life or in a particular period of history and children need their imagination to make sense of that. However, watching TV or surfing the Internet is a passive activity which is not as effective as reading in the development of children’s imagination abilities.

    Although television viewers and Internet users cannot develop their imagination quickly, they can improve their language skills, especially in speaking and listening skills. What I mean is that frequent television viewers are exposed to a variety of multimedia information from news shows and educational programs. Internet users can access interactive entertainment by online chatting ('chatting online' woyld be more native) or make posts and comments. All of these things are beneficial to the development of speaking and listening skills. In terms of leisure reading (this phrase is maybe not the best to use here, I would suggest 'regarding leisure reading' as a replacement), I tend to believe that it is more helpful in improving children’s writing and reading skills because books mainly provide textual content.

    Overall, leisure reading is more beneficial to developing children’s imagination as well as reading and writing skills, and electronic screen media is a powerful tool for children to improve their speaking and listening skills. Parents and teachers need to find the balance between these two ways of learning to achieve children’s potential.


    Please help me to review this essay,thank you!

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    April 5, 2015
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    March 29, 2015
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    天下無賊 昨天我看了一部電影叫天下無賊。這一部電影很好但是也有點難過。我覺得中文電影很有興趣。
    March 28, 2015
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    These Things Enrich My Life (or have enriched my life)

    I am interested in so many things. Music, movies, photography and cooking are all my favourites (maybe "favourite things" is better). About music, Carpenters is my favourite band, some of my friends think that I am so old-fashioned. Am I ??? Besides, I also like many pop bands and singers, Coldplay, One Republic, Maroon 5, Imagine Dragons, Ed Sheeran, James Blunt, Keith Urban, Lo-Fang, Jon McLaughlin ...There are too many to count. Because of (all) these different kinds of music, my life is so colourful. I'm also a super fan of MARVEL's superhero movies. Of course, it doesn't mean that I don't like other styles of movies. I love watching different kinds of movies so much, except horror films. I always put myself into the story deeply and it is the best way for me to relieve my bad moods. Photography is another hobby of mine. I think taking photos and freezing moments in time, is very meaningful. Cooking is my favourite thing to do on usual days. Is there anything more gratifying than making delicious food? I thank all of these things for enriching my life.

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    March 26, 2015
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    In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?

    In recent decades, humans have invented a great piece of equipment in the world which is the computer. I believe the computer is a good techology product for work. However, after the development of the internet, it is altering people's lifestyle.

    The invention of the internet has had on impact on relationships in business. First of all, working by computer, is an accurate way to input any date and people can save documents on the computer, with services like dropbox and the cloud by internet. For example, workers on business trips in different contries can use dropbox or the cloud to show any product information with customers everywhere.

    As far as I am concerned, internet apps, such as skype and facebook, are convenient in many different social ways. Firstly, it can communicate affection with friends by facebook, I don't have to make appointments because I can use facebook to have conversations with many friends on a facebook group. Secondly, in learning. Through E-mail I can send homework to my teacher and sometimes we use skype to discuss my study programs.

    On the other hand (This phrase is usually used for comparison, for example, "Your cat is black, on the other hand, my cat is white," maybe you could use the words "Also" or "Furthermore" instead.), it is easy by using internet apps, to achieve many things. Thus, we forget how to communicate face to face on dinner dates or how to write a letter by hand, in the real world.

    Based on the two important factors outlined above - ease of working and Multiple social ways - it is clear that it's important for many different users to get use from the internet, but we must not reduce the human relationships in real life communities.

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    March 14, 2015
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    Sports event

    Nowadays, people’s opinion towards sporting events are controversial. Some people believe that the sporting events, such as The World Cup, may help to reduce the tension and prejudice between countries and keep the peace of the world. I partly agree with this opinion.

    Obviously, many friends are formed through playing or watching sports, and sporting rivalries, although keen, can be friendly. Some sporting events, such as The World Cup, attracts tourists from all over the world and brings them together. They release their energy and excitement through playing football or watching it on TV. Also, it may help them to leap over barriers which divide them and embrace each other.

    From what I read, Pierre de coubertin, who is the founder of Olympics Games, said that the spirits of The Olympic Games (or you can say simply "The Olympics") are diversity of sports, amateur athletes, friendly cooperation, promoting peace and understanding as well as abolishing racial discrimination.There is also an example to prove that the sporting events really can do things like the Olympics Games’ spirits said---the ping-pang games between America and China. Between our two countries we have differences, but we also share a common humility and a common curiosity in that table tennis competition that contributes to ease tension between these two countries.

    However, recently football competitions like The World Cup, have even worsened relations between countries rather than improving them. The tragic consequences [of this] are the breeding hatred and contempt between countries.

    Overall, I firmly believe that sporting rivalries can overcome mutual national stereotypes and keep the peace of the world. But a right attitude and an appropriate way of dealing with conflict in the process of competition are crucial. As the saying goes, the friendship always before the competition.

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    March 2, 2015
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    Letter Writing in Electronic Century

    Nowadays,with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers,fewer and fewer people write letters.Therefore,some people believe that the traditional skill of letter writing will disappear one day.Actually,I tend to disagree with this.

    Obviously, the growth of technology has revolutionized the way we communicate and made our communication more efficient.Today,many apps and social websites for mobile phones or computers are provided to us to meet new people.For example,I find a great website to improve my English is “italki”. I can make more friends from all over the world and communicate with them on that.On the other hand,we can also keep in touch with our family by using high-tech equipment and by sharing our recent conditions to them. Unlike writing letters where we need to pay for stamps, we surely need not pay an extra fee from this way [of communicating].

    However,writing letters can sometimes express our emotions more clearly and effectively compared with using high-tech equipment.When we are writing letters,we have enough time to think deeply how to express ourselves and also can show our sincerity to the recipient.Also, between the time after sending letters and before getting a response,many people enjoy the feeling during this period.In addition,using any high-tech equipment for a longer time would pose health risks to users because of the radiation it produces.

    To sum up,a large number of people get benefits from the rapid growth of technology because it brings convenience and time-saving to us as well as being easy to use for younger people.However,there is one group of people we usually ignore--elderly people such as our grandparents.They do not know how to use this high-tech equipment because of their poor eyesight or other reasons. Although they can learn how to use that [new technology],they need much time and patience. Therefore, the traditional way of communication is still needed when we get in touch with them.

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    February 26, 2015
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    composition 1 (小作文 1)

    Today is Sunday the last day of the weekend, the weekend always goes fast and tomorrow will be a working day. Fortunately, the Spring festival is coming soon, there will be 5 days of holiday for me, I'll travel to Hangzhou to be with my family. Haha!

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    February 21, 2015
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    大學 (二) 你好!我叫 Hal。我是學生在讀大學。我的專業是遊戲藝術設計。我們做電腦。谢谢你看这些文字。再见。
    February 21, 2015
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    Self-examination about garbage in the mountain

    It is necessary to take back your garbage when you leave a nature environment . Not only in the mountains, but everywhere including beaches and parks.
    Nature enthusiasts, such as mountain climbers and surfers, won`t leave trash in natural environments. On the other hand, as the article said: commercials that caught the attention of a lot of people, caused the levels of trash to go down quickly. It is hard to force a high moral standard on everyone.
    Nature will reflect the same thing if humans treat it badly (i.e. avalanches, poison water ).
    Permit fees are the cost for permission to go to the mountain.
    It costs you about 4000 NT for permit fees to go to 玉山.
    It reminds me of news about recycling recently. The life of Rag-picker (trash-picker?) is getting harder and harder. The government wants to reduce the cost of used paper and bottles. The earnings of the underprivileged are each only equal to the price of a lunch box a day. All of the profit is taken by politicians and businessmen .
    You wouldn't be happy while surrounded by poverty and tragedy even if you are rich. That is why I don`t agree with some policies about contracts to make the rich get richer .
    http://www.economist.com/blogs/economist-explains/2014/05/economist-explains-15

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    February 20, 2015
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