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In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? In recent decades, the humans invent a great equipment in the world which is computer. I believe the computer is a well techology product to work. However, after development of internet, is accompaning to alter people's lifestyle. The invention of internet has had on impact on relationship in business. First of all, working by computer, is accurate to input any date and to save the documents on computer, which like the dropbox of cloud by internet. For example, the worker be on a business trip in different contries, they can use dropbox of cloud to show any produce information with customer in everywhere. As far as I am concerned, the app of internet, such as skype and facebook, is convenience in many different social type.Firstly, it can contact affection with friends by facebook, I don't have to make a appointment which via facebook to conversation many friend on a group of facebook. Secondly, in learning, I though E-mail to send homework for my teacher and sometimes we use skype which discuss my study programs. On the other hand, it is to easy by app of internet which achieve manythings. Thus, we forget which using face to face on the dinner date or writing a letter by hand on the real world. Based on the two important factors outlined above - ease of working and Multiple social way - it is clear that for many different user to get well usefulness on internet, but we must don't reduce the relationships of humans in real life of community.

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In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?

In recent decades, humans have invented a great piece of equipment in the world which is the computer. I believe the computer is a good techology product for work. However, after the development of the internet, it is altering people's lifestyle.

The invention of the internet has had on impact on relationships in business. First of all, working by computer, is an accurate way to input any date and people can save documents on the computer, with services like dropbox and the cloud by internet. For example, workers on business trips in different contries can use dropbox or the cloud to show any product information with customers everywhere.

As far as I am concerned, internet apps, such as skype and facebook, are convenient in many different social ways. Firstly, it can communicate affection with friends by facebook, I don't have to make appointments because I can use facebook to have conversations with many friends on a facebook group. Secondly, in learning. Through E-mail I can send homework to my teacher and sometimes we use skype to discuss my study programs.

On the other hand (This phrase is usually used for comparison, for example, "Your cat is black, on the other hand, my cat is white," maybe you could use the words "Also" or "Furthermore" instead.), it is easy by using internet apps, to achieve many things. Thus, we forget how to communicate face to face on dinner dates or how to write a letter by hand, in the real world.

Based on the two important factors outlined above - ease of working and Multiple social ways - it is clear that it's important for many different users to get use from the internet, but we must not reduce the human relationships in real life communities.

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