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In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
In recent decades, humans have invented a great piece of equipment in the world which is the computer. I believe the computer is a good techology product for work. However, after the development of the internet, it is altering people's lifestyle.
The invention of the internet has had on impact on relationships in business. First of all, working by computer, is an accurate way to input any date and people can save documents on the computer, with services like dropbox and the cloud by internet. For example, workers on business trips in different contries can use dropbox or the cloud to show any product information with customers everywhere.
As far as I am concerned, internet apps, such as skype and facebook, are convenient in many different social ways. Firstly, it can communicate affection with friends by facebook, I don't have to make appointments because I can use facebook to have conversations with many friends on a facebook group. Secondly, in learning. Through E-mail I can send homework to my teacher and sometimes we use skype to discuss my study programs.
On the other hand (This phrase is usually used for comparison, for example, "Your cat is black, on the other hand, my cat is white," maybe you could use the words "Also" or "Furthermore" instead.), it is easy by using internet apps, to achieve many things. Thus, we forget how to communicate face to face on dinner dates or how to write a letter by hand, in the real world.
Based on the two important factors outlined above - ease of working and Multiple social ways - it is clear that it's important for many different users to get use from the internet, but we must not reduce the human relationships in real life communities.
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