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Those things enriched my life. I am interested in so many things. Music, movies, photography and cooking are all my favourites. About music, Carpenters is my favourite band, some of my friends think that I am so old-fashioned. Do I ??? Besides, I also like many pop bands and singers, Coldplay, One Republic, Maroon 5, Imagine Dragons, Ed Sheeran, James Blunt, Keith Urban, Lo-Fang, Jon McLaughlin ...There are too many to count. Because of these different kinds of music, my life is so colourful. I'm also a super fan of MARVEL's superhero movies. Of course, It doesn't mean that I don't like other styles of movies. I love watching different kinds of movies so much,except the horror one. I always make myself into the story deeply, and it is the best way for me to relieve those bad moods. Photography is another hobby of mine. I think taking photos, freezing the moments, are very meaningful. Cooking is my favourite thing to do on usual days. Is there anything more gratifying than making delicious food? Thank all of these things enriched my life.

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These Things Enrich My Life (or have enriched my life)

I am interested in so many things. Music, movies, photography and cooking are all my favourites (maybe "favourite things" is better). About music, Carpenters is my favourite band, some of my friends think that I am so old-fashioned. Am I ??? Besides, I also like many pop bands and singers, Coldplay, One Republic, Maroon 5, Imagine Dragons, Ed Sheeran, James Blunt, Keith Urban, Lo-Fang, Jon McLaughlin ...There are too many to count. Because of (all) these different kinds of music, my life is so colourful. I'm also a super fan of MARVEL's superhero movies. Of course, it doesn't mean that I don't like other styles of movies. I love watching different kinds of movies so much, except horror films. I always put myself into the story deeply and it is the best way for me to relieve my bad moods. Photography is another hobby of mine. I think taking photos and freezing moments in time, is very meaningful. Cooking is my favourite thing to do on usual days. Is there anything more gratifying than making delicious food? I thank all of these things for enriching my life.

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Those things enriched my life.

I am interested in so many things: music, movies, photography and cooking are all my favourites. As for music, Carpenters is my favourite band, some of my friends think that I am so old-fashioned. Am I ?Besides the ones I mentioned, I also like many pop bands and singers: Coldplay, One Republic, Maroon 5, Imagine Dragons, Ed Sheeran, James Blunt, Keith Urban, Lo-Fang, Jon McLaughlin etc... There are too many to count. Because of these different kinds of music, my life is so colourful. I'm also a super big fan of MARVEL's superhero movies. Of course, it doesn't mean that I don't like other styles of movies. I love watching different kinds of movies so much,except the horror one. I always make find myself deeply into the story deeply, and it is the best way for me to relieve stress those bad moods. Photography is another hobby of mine. I think taking photos, freezing the moments, are very meaningful. Cooking is my favourite thing to do on usual days most days. Is there anything more gratifying than making delicious food? Thanks to all of these things for enriching my life.

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Those things enriched my life.

I am interested in so many things. Music, movies, photography and cooking are all my favourites. About music, Carpenters is my favourite band, some of my friends think that I am so old-fashioned. Do Am I ??? Besides, I also like many pop bands and singers, Coldplay, One Republic, Maroon 5, Imagine Dragons, Ed Sheeran, James Blunt, Keith Urban, Lo-Fang, Jon McLaughlin ...There are too many to count. Because of these different kinds of music, my life is so colourful. I'm also a super fan of MARVEL's superhero movies. Of course, It doesn't mean that I don't like other styles of movies. I love watching different kinds of movies so much,except the horror one. I always make myself into the story deeply, and it is the best way for me to relieve those bad moods. Photography is another hobby of mine. I think taking photos, freezing the moments, are very meaningful. Cooking is my favourite thing to do on usual days. Is there anything more gratifying than making delicious food? Thank all of these things enriched my life.

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Hi. I'm not specialist in English, but I saw a small mistakes.

 

"...my friends think that I am so old-fashioned. Do I ???..." - "...my friends think that I am so old-fashioned. Am I ???..." 

 

 

 

 

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