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女同时（同事）。。。 太早了
我刚到工作（地点）. 我办公室有七个人，除了我以外，她们都是女人。把她们我都很喜欢，可是早晨都太聒噪了. 我很喜欢聊天，可是起点太早了。工作不忙的时候我宁可看书，学习中文。我不要（想显得）有无礼，可是在这个时候，聊天有点痛苦.The first one may be a typo
“到”usually refer to a place in this situation, so after“工作”, you'd better insert “地点” as indicating a specific area for work.
“她们”is not necessary here, because you used"除了我”
“把”is a tricky word here. In Chinese, "把”can be used ad a verb which means chase someone especially when you use it before "girls". So don't use it here.
"聒噪” is excellently applied here. It's a word usually seen in articles which means we don't use it so commonly in oral Chinsese. The replace can be“八婆”( specifically refer to someone likes gossip. But here" 聒噪”is more precise.
I presume“起点”is another typo
“我不要无礼”sounds weird. In English you may say" I don't want to be impolite"，so " be" is a state,. That's why we use “显得”to indicate that you're in a kind of state, rather than "要”, which equals to" want to have". Because "无礼" is not a real object, you can't hold it in your hand, right?
I merely point out some errors, but to make it more like a Chinese style diary, others' opinions are more benefiting. Hope you enjoy learning Chinese:)
0 votedApril 6, 20160- Jealous This is what I feel over years. I jealous on people better than me. It is, to public notion, a negative emotion. So I usually cover it as a stimuli. I told myself it's OK to experience it and what I should do is making myself a better man. But it happens every time when someone performed better than me, much worse, on my dearest friends. I feel ashamed to have this universal emotion.November 8, 201430
Market [254]
There are many people in China, thus various markets exist. Two typical types of markets are conventional market and supermarket. In a conventional market, you can see the price is always cheaper. However, the convenience, including the accessibility, is relatively unsatified. I guess the stiation is very much the same in other countries.
My family members are very fond of eating fish. My wife usually prefers to go to the supermarket to buy fishes about one or two hours ahead the closing time because there are special discounts at that time. Recently my wife and I went to the biggest fish market in Seoul to eat lobsters with other couples. Surprisingly we found that the price of fishes are even lower than the discount price of the supermarket. The closing time of the fish market is about five o'clock, so my wife begins to get there at about four o'clock. Yesterday, we had a special dinner, grilled cutlassfish, at home but it cost only ten dollars.
(The first paragraph is a liberal translation of a Chinese text from "http://bitex-cn.com/". The second paragraph is my own story. Would you correct my English? Thank you in advance.)0 votedNovember 7, 20141My day
I woke up at 8. I had a shower, a breakfast which I made. Now, I'm working in my shop. But, as there's no customer, I can work on my English. However I till hope I can get a lot of customers today ! I leave my shop at noon. I'm going to have lunch with my daughter though I don't know yet what we will eat. Maybe pasta !
Another daughter of mine doesn't come home at noon because her school is so far to have enough time to come back. My husband stays in his office, too.
This evening, after having dinner, I think we are going to watch TV.
Tomorow, I'm the only one of the family who will work ! But after that, since I don't have to work on Monday, and Tuesday is a public holiday, I will have a three-days off !
I can read, watch TV, walk down,and sleep ! What a wonderful weekend !0 votedNovember 7, 20140
