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IELTS Writing Practice: Task1
(Reference: https://www.ielts-exam.net/academic_writing_samples_task_1/111/)
The bar chart illustrates how computers and Internet are spread among 9 different countries in the Arab world. According to the graph, it is clearly seen that the UAE is the most developed country in IT technology of compared to the others.
In terms of the diffusion spead of computers, the number of computer users is approximately 150 in the UAE and 130 in Kuwait per thousand inhabitants. Then, less than 70 inhabitants out of thousand hold their own computers in the rest of countries. Especially, in Egypt and Morocco, only 20 computers are used per thousand users.
There is a similar trend regarding the spread of Internet. The UAE has the greatest popularity of Internet users with almost 350 per thousand inhabitants. Although there is a big gap, Kuwait and Lebanon rank on second and third respectively with 100 and 80 per thousand users. Similarly, Egypt and Morocco have a small number of users and especially Syria has only less than 10 users of thousand.
In conclusion, although there are different number of users in computers and Internet overall, the UAE has the largest popularity of users in both computers and the Internet.**Nicely written! You're greatly improving.
0 votedApril 13, 20181My diary 4/4
I decided to write diaries in English. I seldom don't often write diaries. so far. From today I will write it everyday as much as I can.
I hope someone fixes my diary . Then I can know grammar and vocabulary that I need to learn.
On At work I mistook my stamp on a lot of documents in the boss stamp space. I had to fix it all. I wasted many a lot of time.英語頑張ってね！
0 votedApril 8, 20180IELTS writing practice: task1
(Reference: https://www.ielts-exam.net/academic_writing_samples_task_1/89/)
The bar chart illustrates how much time each people person type spends for unpaid works, such as childcare, house chores, and gardening, per week in 3 different conditions categories. Overall, compared to women, men are less likely to take do these the housework over all categories.
According to the graph, it can be said that married women spend much more time for unpaid works rather than men. For example, among families who do not have their own children, women use spend 30 hours per week for unpaid works at home whereas men spend less than 20 hours. for these works. The gap of the time spent for unpaid works between women and men become greatly bigger if they have their own more children. If parents have 1-2 children, women are likely to spend over 50 hours per week for childcare and housework even though there is no difference in men. Surprisingly, although mothers who have more than 3 children have to kill their time for at nearly 55 hours a week while the husbands spend less time to help with house chores.
In conclusion, as the number of children is more increasing increases, the gap of time spent for housework activities at home between sexes is much expanding expands.0 votedApril 7, 20181- 仕事の話です。 仕事を始めました！今日は三つ目の日でした。作業というとちょっとつまらないですけど仕事は仕事です。店長はとてもやさしいです。信頼できる人だそうです。でもゆっくり行きます。みんなは私が簡単に人を信用するってよく言われます。実は前の仕事でその店長にだまされました。得に多いのお金を貸しました。結局やめました。なぜやめたかそれは一つの理由でした。その店長をまだ信じています。彼は必ず返すから別に起こっているとか悲しいとかその感情がないです。お金が困ているとき彼は何もしてなかったです。この生活が続けないから新しい仕事を見つけたほうがいいと思いました。これから新しい人生を始めているそうです。 まずはもっとまじめに日本語を勉強しないといけません。April 7, 201820
Please correct my essay:) I need some specific example for writing about Chinese cashless society.
I disagree to become a completely cashless society. I have two reasons to support my opinion.First of all, the technology depends on smartphones too much. When we start to use electronic money, we have to offer a lot of private information: like name, home address and bank account etc.Therefore, if our phones were stolen, our privacy informations might be get stolen. And unless we have smartphones, we can not do anything. I’ve watched a Chinese woman whose phone was broken. In fact, she struggled to pay for everything.
Secondly, internet crime is so complicated. Recently many people invest in cyrptocurrencies online. In January 2018, an amount of virtual money was stolen from a firm in Japan. Many people just struggled with fear in front of the firm. And there was no way to solve the crime for them. The only thing to do was wating to wait.
It is for these reasons, that I disagree to become a completely cashless society.
**Good luck with your future essay writing, hope this helped!
0 votedApril 3, 20181About traveling
I like traveling a lot and if I have two days off, I want to travel somewhere. I've been to a lot of places from Hokkaido to Okinawa in Japan. My favorite trip was traveling to Osaka with my friends. First of all, we rent a car at Niigata and we drive to Nagoya, Kagawa and Osaka. There are many places in Osaka. For example, we could can eat "Kushikatsu" which has many kinds of meats or fried vegetables are fried. That It was so good. And we could go and see a comedy stage, Yoshimoto shinkigeki. Many comedians played a humorous story and we enjoyed it. I'd like to go there again. On the other hand, I've been abroad only once to Australia. My friends and I had a great time there because we saw many animals like a koalas, kangaroos and something. Of course, we went to great barrier reef and swam in the sea. That It was so beautiful. I talked with native speakers in English there. It was a little difficult for me to talk in all English but it was a good experience. I want to go abroad more and talk English a lot.**I haven't traveled a lot but one day I hope to go to Japan. Hope my corrections helped you!
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