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My Traveling Experiences
I like to travel a lot and if I have two consecutive days off, I always hope to be able to travel somewhere. I've been to a lot of places in Japan, from Hokkaido to Okinawa. My favorite trip was traveling to Osaka with my friends. First of all, we rented a car in Niigata and then, we drove to Nagoya, Kagawa and Osaka. There are many things to do and places to eat in Osaka. For example, we ate "Kushikatsu" which is usually pork, but it could be other types of meat, and vegetables, that have been deep-fried and which are served on a skewer. That was so delicious! And, while there, we went and saw the comedy group, Yoshimoto Shinkigeki, live on stage. They performed skits which were very humorous and entertaining, and we enjoyed it tremendously. So if possible, I'd like to go to Osaka sometime soon again.
On the other hand, I've been abroad only once, to Australia. My friends and I had a great time there because we saw many well-known animals like a koala, a kangaroo and a platypus/wombat(?).* Of course, we also went to The Great Barrier Reef and even swam in the nearby sea. That was such a beautiful experience! I even spoke English with native speakers while I was there. Admittedly, it was a little difficult for me to converse in English, but it was still both a good and interesting encounter. I hope to able to go abroad more often and to speak English a lot more.**
Hi Takaya. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. J.
*Just a guess on my part, I was trying to think of some animal which is native to Australia…
**Yes, speak with native speakers as much as you can! It is just as important as learning grammar, etc.
About traveling
I like traveling a lot and if I have two days off, I want to travel somewhere. I've been to a lot of places from Hokkaido to Okinawa in Japan. My favorite trip was traveling to Osaka with my friends. First of all, we rent a car at Niigata and we drive to Nagoya, Kagawa and Osaka. There are many places in Osaka. For example, we could can eat "Kushikatsu" which has many kinds of meats or fried vegetables are fried. That It was so good. And we could go and see a comedy stage, Yoshimoto shinkigeki. Many comedians played a humorous story and we enjoyed it. I'd like to go there again. On the other hand, I've been abroad only once to Australia. My friends and I had a great time there because we saw many animals like a koalas, kangaroos and something. Of course, we went to great barrier reef and swam in the sea. That It was so beautiful. I talked with native speakers in English there. It was a little difficult for me to talk in all English but it was a good experience. I want to go abroad more and talk English a lot.**I haven't traveled a lot but one day I hope to go to Japan. Hope my corrections helped you!
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