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IELTS Writing Practice: Task1
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The bar chart illustrates how computers and Internet are spread among 9 different countries in the Arab world. According to the graph, it is clearly seen that the UAE is the most developed country in IT technology of compared to the others.
In terms of the diffusion spead of computers, the number of computer users is approximately 150 in the UAE and 130 in Kuwait per thousand inhabitants. Then, less than 70 inhabitants out of thousand hold their own computers in the rest of countries. Especially, in Egypt and Morocco, only 20 computers are used per thousand users.
There is a similar trend regarding the spread of Internet. The UAE has the greatest popularity of Internet users with almost 350 per thousand inhabitants. Although there is a big gap, Kuwait and Lebanon rank on second and third respectively with 100 and 80 per thousand users. Similarly, Egypt and Morocco have a small number of users and especially Syria has only less than 10 users of thousand.
In conclusion, although there are different number of users in computers and Internet overall, the UAE has the largest popularity of users in both computers and the Internet.
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