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- GB Training - V2. Could someone help me check the grammar in this article? Thanks. Green Belt Training, from January 1 to 4, was completed smoothly in Wuhan. 100 employees of TAC(company name) China attended this training, of whom 60 were from MNST(short name of company), including 10 GBs and 10 BBs. GB training aims at improving the ability of the trainee to solve problems in a professional way, thus improve his/her ability to play an important role in the project. To the trainees, the knowledge they were required to master in 5 days is too much. That including 4 Principles, 16 Wastes, Pugh Matrix, etc. For the test, one got the 80% score was needed(考试及格线为：作答正确率达到80%). All these put great pressure on the trainees(这些因素都施加于学员们很大压力), and in the end, 99% from our MNSTcolleagues passed the exam. But on the other hand, the trainees acquired new knowledge, they improved their ability to analyze and solve problems from many different aspects, and they made new friends. That will have a positive impact on their future careers. Finally, thanks to the teachers: Jim, David and Zhaoqing.October 20, 201400
- Does anyone could help me check if this article is grammatically right? Many Thanks!! I know the content of below article may be professional, just help me to correct the grammatical mistakes, THANKS. Wave 2 Training (9/15-9/19) was finished smoothly in WUHAN city. There were 78 employees of PITA China attended this training, of these 20 were from AWEF, including 10 GBs and 10 BBs. The training aims at improving the ability of trainee to solve the questions in a professional way, thus one will play an important role in the project he is involved in. To the trainees, the knowledge they were required to master in 5 days is too much. That including, 15 Principles, 8 Wastes, 17 Core Processes, VST, VOC, etc. for the test, one got the 80% score was needed. All these put great pressure on the trainees, and 90% from we AWEF colleagues passed the exam at last. But in the other hand, the trainees learned new knowledge, they can analyze and solve questions from many aspects and make new friends. That will have a positive impact on their future job. In the end, thanks for the teachers: Jim, David.October 15, 201450
doctors, harry potter, plaza dance
Indonesian doctors need at least six years of studying in university, then they can be a general practitioner. Later if he/she can pursue higher education to be a sturgeon, gynecologist, etc.
I have many hobbies, one of them is reading. I read a lot of books, my favorite is Harry Potter series. I also like dancing and watching people dance. When I was in China I saw people dancing on parks (later I know it is called plaza-dancing), my friend had to drag me away because I was too absorbed in them. For some reasons she seemed to dislike them. I have this impression that plaza-dancing is considered a low-class activity in China, is it true? It's a pity, I think plaza-dancing is beautiful. The next day I came to the park again by myself, this time I could watch without being disturbed! :D
西医、哈利波特、广场舞
在印尼、人应该至少六年学习在大学、后成为一个普通医生。然后他/她可以高等教育如果想成为一个外科医生、或妇科医生、等。
我有很多爱好、其中之一是读书。我读了很多书、我最喜欢的是哈利波特系列。我也喜欢跳舞、还喜欢看别人跳舞。在中国的时、我看了跳舞的人们在公园看到人们在公园跳舞(后来才知道了那叫广场舞)、我的朋友一定不得不拖走我因为我太吸收投入了。由于某些原因、我想她不喜欢那舞。感觉得到在中国广场舞算是小家子气的做、对吗？真可惜、我想认为广场舞很美丽。一天后、我再去公园当家、我终于可以没有干扰看! ：D我自己去公园，这次我可以不受干扰的欣赏了。Nice to meet you and my English is not well. Planza-dancing is not low-class,there are lots of Chinese do it, their ages almost 100% are over 40, and most of them are female.It's a way to take exercise and look for joy with other people for city life, but sometimes it's noisy and annoying.It depend on the inner quality of the dancing people. Can we be friends? sometimes I need someone to modify my articles.Could you reply me by leaving me a message,thanks.
0 votedOctober 14, 20140- Could anyone help me check the grammar? THANKS. Please modify the article as many as you can.thanks. “Process Quality Competition” of our company had finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition. There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she got the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of 7 standards. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the quality status of the project, the project got its ranking. All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last 4 projects won. The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. In the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company. All the judges and projects list as follows: Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.October 6, 201450
Could anyone help me check if the article is grammatically correct? Many thanks.
“Process Quality Competition” had finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition.
There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she get the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of the 7 standards. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the process quality status of the project, the project got its ranking.
All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last the 4 projects won: VST Project, Quality Project, Quality Improvement Project, and Capacity Project.
The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. In the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company.
All the judges and projects list as follows:Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.
0 votedOctober 6, 20140前天去电影馆（院）
我前天去电影馆看“The Maze Runner”了。我跟五位朋友一起去坐公共车到电影馆了（的）。我非常喜欢坐公共车。
Could you help me check if the article is grammatically correct? Thanks.
“Process Quality Competition” had finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition.
There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she get the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of the 7 standards. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the process quality status of the project, the project got its ranking.
All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last the 4 projects won: VST Project, Quality Project, Quality Improvement Project, and Capacity Project.
The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. In the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company.
All the judges and projects list as follows:Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.Please send me messege or email if you want to help me.
0 votedOctober 6, 201402014年10月3日
今天我很累。因为昨天晚上我不会睡觉(没有睡好)。我的朋友告诉我很多的问题。以后(事情后）我不开心。早上三点在卧室的墙上我看（看到）一个（只）壁虎。我害怕。它去（爬到)我的床(边）。我不会—（不敢）睡觉。每个（隔）五分钟我看一次壁虎。
Could you help me check if the article is grammatically correct? Thanks.
“Process Quality” has finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition.
There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements in PQ through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she getting the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of the 7 standards: Definition of Project, Data Collection & Measurement, Facts and Data Analysis, Process/Product Improvement Plan, Implementation/Deployment Plan, Benefits/Results Attained and Controlling/Sustaining Benefits. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the process quality status of the project, the project got its ranking.
All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last the 4 projects won: VST Project, Valves Quality Improvement, Quality Improvement, and Capacity Improvement.
The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. At the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company.
All the judges and projects list as follows:Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.
0 votedOctober 6, 20140
