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Could anyone help me check the grammar? THANKS. Please modify the article as many as you can.thanks. “Process Quality Competition” of our company had finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition. There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she got the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of 7 standards. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the quality status of the project, the project got its ranking. All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last 4 projects won. The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. In the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company. All the judges and projects list as follows: Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.

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The “Process Quality Competition” of our company finished smoothly on Sep 12th.

Our aim in this competition were not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best candidates to join the higher level project competition. 

There were in total 11 projects displayed this year. For each one, the project leader made a introduction of their project and showed the improvements through the PPT. Next the judges submitted their questions and after they got an answer from the project leader, they awarded each team a score of 7 standards. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the quality status of the project, the project got its ranking.


All the projects were very well recieved by the judges and, after much deliberation, four projects won awards. The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; even for the judges, they mostly found the answers they sought. In the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. This kind of discussion must be good for our company.


All the judges and projects list as follows:

Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.

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