Does anyone could help me check if this article is grammatically right? Many Thanks!!
I know the content of below article may be professional, just help me to correct the grammatical mistakes, THANKS.
Wave 2 Training (9/15-9/19) was finished smoothly in WUHAN city. There were 78 employees of PITA China attended this training, of these 20 were from AWEF, including 10 GBs and 10 BBs.
The training aims at improving the ability of trainee to solve the questions in a professional way, thus one will play an important role in the project he is involved in. To the trainees, the knowledge they were required to master in 5 days is too much. That including, 15 Principles, 8 Wastes, 17 Core Processes, VST, VOC, etc. for the test, one got the 80% score was needed. All these put great pressure on the trainees, and 90% from we AWEF colleagues passed the exam at last. But in the other hand, the trainees learned new knowledge, they can analyze and solve questions from many aspects and make new friends. That will have a positive impact on their future job. In the end, thanks for the teachers: Jim, David.
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Does anyone could help me check if this article is grammatically right?
Could someone help me check the grammar in this article? Many Thanks!!
I know that the content of the article below is technical. may be professional, Please just help me to correct the grammatical mistakes. Thanks in advance.
Wave 2 Training (9/15-9/19) was finished smoothly in WUHAN city.
The second wave of training, from September 15 to 19, was completed smoothly in Wuhan, Hubei, China.
There were 78 employees of PITA China attended this training, of these whom 20 were from AWEF, including 10 GBs and 10 BBs.
The training aims at improving the ability of the trainee to solve problems in a professional way, thus improving his or her ability to play an important role in the project. thus one will play an important role in the project he is involved in.
To the trainees, it appeared that they were required to master too much knowledge in only 5 days. is too much.
That including, 15 Principles, 8 Wastes, 17 Core Processes, VST, VOC, etc. for the test, one got the 80% score was needed. ??? I don't understand this. Please put Chinese original.
All these put great pressure on the trainees, ???
and, in the end, 90% from we our AWEF colleagues passed the exam at last. But on the other hand, the trainees acquired new knowledge, they improved their ability to analyze and solve problems from many different aspects, and they made new friends. That will have a positive impact on their future careers. Finally, thanks to the teachers Jim and David.
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I have made a revision,is this better?
Wave 2 Training (9/15-9/19) was finished smoothly in Beijing city. There were 78 employees of China company attended this training, of these 20 were from shanghai, including 10 males and 10 females.
The training aims at improving the ability of trainee to solve the questions in a professional way, thus one will play an important role in the project he is involved in. To the trainees, the knowledge they were required to master in 5 days is too much. That including 15 Principles, 8 Wastes, etc. For the test, one got the 80% score was needed. All these put great pressure on the trainees, and 90% colleagues passed the exam at last. But in the other hand, the trainees learned new knowledge, they can analyze and solve questions from many aspects and make new friends. That will have a positive impact on their future job. In the end, thanks for the teachers: Jim, David.
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Hey Kurt, I don't understand any thing :)
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